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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Nov 24, 2017 10:20 am

Guys! School gave me writing material that I ended up happy with!! :D I'd really appreciate it if you could check the two short-stories out and give me some feedback, I'm really proud of them :D also I need titles XD Aziz and Gareth :D


Silver Pandorica wrote:Yikes. I looked back at the earlier chapters of my current novel and had a weird mixture of cringe and nostalgia. Also...there’s some characters I threw in during more recent chapters *cough* June *cough, cough* Terrace *cough, sputter, cough* because I hadn’t thought of them until then, and I need to go back and add them into earlier chapters. Oh gosh. There are so many things I need to go back and rewrite and scrap and completely redo and change and fix and AGDKLRJKJL I can’t do that yet!

Somebody slap me. I need to write.

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Everyone's so fired up and inspired atm, it's great :.D
HA not me. But I like seeing everyone else get inspired c’:
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Woah Morioh, that's awesome! I love it, it's really good! :D
There was just one piece: 'The force of my only guide begins relenting relentlessly.' and I'm not sure, did you contradict yourself purposefully, or...?


winged-backpack wrote:@anyone interested in that advent thing
If I were to post my list of prompts/chapter encouragements, would anyone else be interesting in using them? I wouldn't want to post them here needlessly but if you guys are interested (I'm adding songs and stuff which would be easily edited and personalised to different people so whatever really)
If I'm completely honest, I don't actually know XD It could go either way, but I personally would be interested in seeing them to see if they give me ideas! c:
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Fri Nov 24, 2017 12:39 pm

@Backpack, I'm a sucker for prompt lists, so definitely.

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby winged-backpack » Sat Nov 25, 2017 3:29 am

Hey all, so I finished creating my prompt list. There's 4 days which just say "new chapter" and that's for 10,000 Doors, so they could be your own works or just replaced with sommat else. Also, there are 3 days that are a few of my favourite songs, so you can chop and change those as you like. I'm posting it now so that if anyone wants to plan or anything, you can! I've also posted it on deviantART, which is also where all the days will be posted (I tend to use not-safe-for-cs topics and language so making a thread on here isn't ideal ^^')

Advent Challenge 2017 wrote:
    1. Winter
    2. New chapter
    3. Yesterday
    4. In the walls
    5. Gift
    6. Ritual
    7. November Rain – Guns ‘N’ Roses
    8. Comfort
    9. Life Of The Party- All Time Low
    10. New chapter
    11. Lie
    12. Your younger self
    13. Poison – Alice Cooper
    14. Apocalypse
    15. Countdown
    16. Labyrinth
    17. New chapter
    18. Future
    19. Coffee
    20. Rat
    21. Museum
    22. New chapter
    23. Rooftop
    24. Rockstar
    25. Present


Do tell me if you do choose to do this! I'd love to read what everyone does!
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Sat Nov 25, 2017 4:29 am

Looks cool! I'll make my own thread on here real quick, and fill in the 'new chap' and songs with my own things!

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby passione » Sat Nov 25, 2017 5:41 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys!
I did mean to contradict myself but the more I read it, the more I realize it doesn't make sense XD
I'll be fixing everything up based on your suggestions before handing it in on Tuesday.

By the way, Dev, the prompt challenge seems like a lot of fun! I'll be participating on wattpad :)
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat Nov 25, 2017 5:59 pm

So I am in a perfect carrot situation... my villain is waaaay to powerful and I don't know how to get rid of him... and I feel chocking on a carrot would be a little anti-climactic... any suggestions? I also really want to write ~2,000 words in two hours, which I can do as long as I know what I'm writing...
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby danheng » Sat Nov 25, 2017 6:11 pm

Woogwoo Wren wrote:So I am in a perfect carrot situation... my villain is waaaay to powerful and I don't know how to get rid of him... and I feel chocking on a carrot would be a little anti-climactic... any suggestions? I also really want to write ~2,000 words in two hours, which I can do as long as I know what I'm writing...



have him be tricked into imprisonment or death by his own mistakes- this only works if your charries are somewhat clever but always my favorite way to end a villain <3
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Sun Nov 26, 2017 1:26 am

Woogwoo Wren wrote:So I am in a perfect carrot situation... my villain is waaaay to powerful and I don't know how to get rid of him... and I feel chocking on a carrot would be a little anti-climactic... any suggestions? I also really want to write ~2,000 words in two hours, which I can do as long as I know what I'm writing...

No please. Kill him with a carrot, but make it dramatic. You can do it. Utterly humiliate them by killing them by choking on a carrot.

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Nov 26, 2017 12:25 pm

winged-backpack wrote:Hey all, so I finished creating my prompt list. There's 4 days which just say "new chapter" and that's for 10,000 Doors, so they could be your own works or just replaced with sommat else. Also, there are 3 days that are a few of my favourite songs, so you can chop and change those as you like. I'm posting it now so that if anyone wants to plan or anything, you can! I've also posted it on deviantART, which is also where all the days will be posted (I tend to use not-safe-for-cs topics and language so making a thread on here isn't ideal ^^')

Advent Challenge 2017 wrote:
    ~snip~


Do tell me if you do choose to do this! I'd love to read what everyone does!
Dev out :D
Ooh! Danke, danke ;D


morioh wrote:Thanks for the feedback guys!
I did mean to contradict myself but the more I read it, the more I realize it doesn't make sense XD
I'll be fixing everything up based on your suggestions before handing it in on Tuesday.

By the way, Dev, the prompt challenge seems like a lot of fun! I'll be participating on wattpad :)
Np! Hope we helped :.D


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Woogwoo Wren wrote:So I am in a perfect carrot situation... my villain is waaaay to powerful and I don't know how to get rid of him... and I feel chocking on a carrot would be a little anti-climactic... any suggestions? I also really want to write ~2,000 words in two hours, which I can do as long as I know what I'm writing...
No please. Kill him with a carrot, but make it dramatic. You can do it. Utterly humiliate them by killing them by choking on a carrot.
I second this very, very hard. Very hard. Please. XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Silver Pandorica » Sun Nov 26, 2017 12:30 pm

Woogwoo Wren wrote:So I am in a perfect carrot situation... my villain is waaaay to powerful and I don't know how to get rid of him... and I feel chocking on a carrot would be a little anti-climactic... any suggestions? I also really want to write ~2,000 words in two hours, which I can do as long as I know what I'm writing...

As hilarious as killing a villain with a carrot would be, perhaps giving them some emotional vulnerability would help. I mean, he’s human too, right? unless he’s an alien or something idk. But like...(as cliche as this would be) he could be motivated by family or a lover or...SOMETHING! Or someone! That he loves! Could be his weakness :D
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