❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby danheng » Tue Oct 24, 2017 5:03 pm

would love some constructive criticism here <3
should be able to only comment with that link, let me know if it doesn't work <3
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Crystal_Winterz » Tue Oct 24, 2017 5:06 pm

eyyy,I want some critique on this ( https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_9WAOsWNOZWAczLLqL9zsh6o0-pHqty6FvJQdjgk83Q/edit?usp=sharing ) Just note, It has to be under 2500 words if you have any comments
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Laikamod » Wed Oct 25, 2017 7:42 am

Is anyone else planning on participating in nanowrimo this year?
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Wed Oct 25, 2017 7:47 am

yes, I am. Are you? What's your story going to be about?

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Laikamod » Wed Oct 25, 2017 7:55 am

TheSongOfTheStars wrote:yes, I am. Are you? What's your story going to be about?


Yeah, I'm going to try at least.
I haven't done one before, but I've seen people say they set a daily word count goal...don't know how that's going to work for me though. xd

I'm thinking about making a story about a witch who wants to do away with death entirely. Haven't expanded much from there yet though, but it's definitely going to be a modern fantasy and maybe time traveling it just depends.

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Wed Oct 25, 2017 8:04 am

Well, actually there's a word count goal set for every day, you can submit your word count to the site and it'll update, that way you can see the progress you make every day.
I'm going to work on a dystopian/sci-fi story. The basis is that a dark matter comet smashed into binary stars, causing a huge amount of the galaxy to suddenly become suspended from reality. The planet that the story takes place on is on the edge of the event, so the majority of the population is suspended and the sunlight becomes heavily filtered, causing the skies to become gray. The characters in the story try to figure out what's happened while trying to escape from an evil scientist who knew about the event beforehand and plans to take over the nearly empty world.

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Laikamod » Wed Oct 25, 2017 8:17 am

Yeah, I don't know if I should join the site but since you mentioned it I might.

Dang, your story sounds like a fun read. ;D
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Wed Oct 25, 2017 11:34 am

Thanks XD I've been looking forwards to writing it for a while.

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby winged-backpack » Wed Oct 25, 2017 12:42 pm

Guess who can't sleep again! But my Edgar Allan Poe story has a solid plan on what I'm actually building up to so I guess you could call that productive (fun fact, I didn't actually get tired until 6am yesterday...this is what happens when I don't have school to force a sleep schedule onto me)

Fun fact 2: this writing thing was actually inspired by irl writing friend who wrote an H.P Lovecraft inspired short story for his EPQ (big project thingy that gets you university credit in the UK). It's also why I asked the question a few pages back about writing in another author's style.

EDIT:: AaaAAAaaaA just thought of an amazing plot twist for my story guys GUYS omg

EDIT (again):: the plot twist was gonna create a plot hole ha whoops okay I got this

EDIT 3:: eyy I finished it! I put it up on my deviantART because I cba with wattpad at 3am...please enjoy I'm quite pleased with how it turned out, but any critiques are appreciated!
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby sparrow; » Wed Oct 25, 2017 8:09 pm

I haven't been super inactive, what're you talking about...
SO has anything much happened in the thread for the last few pages? I'm too tired to go through them now, but I might look through for any new stories or good questions later.
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