by *Blackberry* » Sun Jun 09, 2013 4:08 am
Username: *Blackberry*
Name: Merlila
Age: 1 year
Gender: female
History:
" Mommy! The waves! The sea! They are beautiful! " Merlila exclaimed, her paws holding onto her mom's fur. Her mom frowned, " Kitkins cant swim, I forbid you to do that. I want you have no such thoughts of this anymore. " her mom said firmly. Merlila pouted, looking disappointed. But in her eyes, there was a spark of determined, for swiming. As they walked back home, her mom ran to the room in a hurry, leaving Merlila to close the door. She scampered to the door and pricked up her ears, she heard some hushed voices. " She is a special girl... she wants to swim.. " she could just manage to identify it was her mom's voice. " Yes she is, we should support her. " And that was her dad, than another reply came, " what if she drowned like Great aunt Greta? " By now, Merlila could identify the "she" was her. And she remembered Great sun Greta, who dreamed of swimming but drowned. Merlila pricked up her ears again, frowning. " We should support her! " that was her father who said determinedly. Than she heard, " Yes we should... She is pretty unusual... " her mom paused, Merlila sniffed softly. She? Unusal?.. she than heard again, " and special. She have fins for swimming.. yes we should supoort her. Let's tell her. " Merlila wiped her tears and lept into her room, and switched on her laptop. And quickly pretend that she was playing her games all along. She quickly went into, " My little pony adventure games* website, and started playing sweating guiltly for hearing her parents talk. She heard a soft voice, " Merlila come out. " Merlila walked out, and sat on the arm chair looking at her parents who sat beside each other. " We have decided to let you swim, and we would support you. " her mom started, and paused, looking at her father, " you can only swim when we are watching, till you're ready to be on your own. And dont let swimming make you fail your exams. " he said smiling warmly. Merlila beamed, " I always get an A for all subjects, dont worry! And mom, " she looked at her mom, " dad, " she looked at her dad, her parents looked surprised. " THANK YOU!! " she shouted and lept onto them, hugging them. Tears streamed down her face, but it was tears of joy.
5 months later...
She was already 10 months, but it was the worst month. Her dad died of a car accident, she had cried for 2 whole weeks already. But had pulled herself together, and decided to continue swimming, to fufull her dream, and make her dad proud. Her mom smiled weakly, her fur gray. She was ill and sick, but watched Merlila dived and swim, she smiled proudly, and said softly and weakly, " that's my girl! " Merlila overheard and beamed, " I promised to make you guys proud. " she said. The next day was her 11 month being in this world, her mom had bought a $100 dollar googles for her daughter. But the next day, her mom was admitted to a hospital, she was clutching the googles, as if knowing this was her last day. Merlila sobbed beside the bed, when she felt a gently touch on her back, she raised her head and saw her mom, with tears in her eyes, " happy birthday sweetheart, your birthday gift. And I love you. " she forced out the words, Merlika reached out for the googles when her mom's paw dropped, and the googles dropped. Merlila picked it up, and cried. She knew this was the end, the very last words she heard was I love you. It had been 5 whole months, and she had never said I kove you to her mom. Merlila looked at her mom, and whispered, " I love you mom. " she saw her mom smiled, before she passed away. At least she had died peacefully, not like her dad who hsd things to do. She smiled and clutched the googles to her chest, and whispered as her mom was pushed away, " Thank you mom "
2 months later...
After recovering from her mom's death, she had become a succesful swimmer, she had joined in plenty of competitions, and won the champion prize. She knew, she was making her parents proud. When a reporter asked her how she became a swimmer she repiled proudly, " because my mom and dad, knew I was special, and supported my dreams. " she than raised the prize and beamed, the medal around her neck. As she went back home, she looked at the trophies she had won, medals, and prizes. She knew, that her parents was crying everyday, because of joy. Her mind wandered back to past, and smiled sadly, when her door creaked, she turned and beamed, " you want to learn swimming? I am not suitable to teach, only my parents are. Sorry dear. " she said kindly, watching the kid walk away, she turned to her family photo and said, " well, mom, dad, are you proud of me? I bet you are. I love you. " she locked the door and walked to her room and closed her eyes as she lept onto her bed and slept, dreaming of her parents, and swiming. But before she slept, she whispered out loud, " I didnt drown like Great aunt Greta, she didnt have good parents like you guys who supported her, you guys are the best.. "
Can this story be judged on the best form, I love Merlila.
Update: July 31st 2016
I will be really busy until after october or something due to studies. I will be trying to catch up on the adoptables I work in. Please shoot me a PM if you want to enquire whether I want to keep my adoptables before deciding to give them away.
