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Re: Artist Army

Postby DoctorDraca » Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:37 am

Gwen Trix, that's all really nice. Smooth lines and nice colours. On the chibi human, I'd suggest drawing fingers. I know chibis often have no fingers, but on such a large and slightly more detailed one, no fingers seem odd.

Lululizzy23, I have no idea on horse anatomy but the legs on the second drawing look very strange. I suggest looking at more photos of horses and keep on drawing to get them right. :D

Royal Mirage, that is beautiful. The way the faces are displayed against the starry sky and water is really nice. The reflection's well done too.

808, on the tiger, the body is much too thin, Tigers are fairly bulky, see? Also, it looks like it has 2 shoulder blades on top of eachother, which is strange, you might want to fix that. ;)
Nice try on the anthro, though.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby The Royal Mirage » Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:38 am

Thanks FF, I've always envied your people drawing skills, so shiny O.O <3 I don't do profiles a lot, I find them really difficult, but it was just natural when I did those ones so I went with it. It's my first GOOD ocean, so you may want to look to someone else for help XD

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Re: Artist Army

Postby Not me nope » Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:39 am

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New thread!~ love the blue;3
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Gwen, I love that style on the human. I like how it has no highlighting, it looks right without it </3 The pose is awsome to. My freind is named Tigi. Tigi seems to fit that character ;A;
Her leg should be flat on the floor for that pose, for now its up, lifted in the air (?) perhaps rotate it untill the leg is flat on the floor ;3

Gwen I wish I had one of the pups but the one I wanted was given away before I got there :U

Lulu, I like them, but I'm not sure, they seem 'fake'. if you know what I mean? stiff... x3
I know they need to be musley, though they are very agile creatues. Take a look at a few refrences if you need.

Royal, I do like that moon;3

808 I will taek a look later 83 I have to go now;3

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Re: Artist Army

Postby antler apathy » Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:49 am

The Royal Mirage - I stared at that picture for about five minutes and when it hit me I was like: "HOLY CRAP, IT'S FACES."

Nex - I enjoy smooth lines :3 Anyways, I was going to do fingers at first, but they're so hard D: I sketched them out but they were all gimpy and deformed :C

Becca~ash - Thanks ^^ You know that wasn't really intentional. I meant to make them flat, but I guess it didn't happen. I'll try to rotate it~

Thank you everyone else for the comments ^^

lululizzy23 - I like them, but I can offer no helpful critique other than the anatomy is off. Because I fail at horses.

808 - I like your fur style, but may I offer some critique/Redlining?

ForgottenFilly - Your humans are always a lot of fun :3 I really love them.

Becca~ash (again) - I love your shading ^^ It's so pretty <3
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Re: Artist Army

Postby The Royal Mirage » Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:56 am

Gwen Trix - that made me lol. It didn't even occur to me that it wasn't obvious in the picture, but I guess it's because I started with the face outlines then spent 20 minutes figuring out what to do with them XD
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Re: Artist Army

Postby lululizzy23 » Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:59 am

Thank you Nex. I know the legs are awkward. I could never draw them
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Akami-chan » Sun Jul 17, 2011 8:00 am

The new thread looks awesome Nex 8D

Sorry I'm not giving much critique now ;A; My tablet is refusing to work
I'll be more helpful once I fix the stupid thing >A>;

@TRM I saw the faces, really nice concept 8D Really love the background too
@ForgottenFilly I love those white shines ;A; Wonderful job on the coloring ^^
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Pear » Sun Jul 17, 2011 8:03 am

Woohoo! :D New thread! :D *Lick-Lick* Tastes like..Art! |D
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Re: Artist Army

Postby fawnkisses » Sun Jul 17, 2011 8:03 am

Did my lines help at all Lulu? xD I doubt they did.

Thank you Mirage, Gwen, and Akami! >w< Really, you like the shines? The ones on the hair are bothering me, but bah, who knows. xD
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Akami-chan » Sun Jul 17, 2011 8:05 am

@ForgottenFilly I actually really like the ones in the hair C: If anything, I'd say make the ones on the shoulders less harsh ^^
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