Lights On Lights Off Fanclub

[Earth to Marzipan]

For a trick I'm going to try and make it funny, and also try not to make them feel bad. I'm not really giving out tricks just yet though.

Also my lights are on right now!

You might want to edit your sig, then! I'd love to send you a trick-or-treat message, but it says your lights are off! (I realize you might have changed your mind since then, but you posted this only a few minutes ago, so I thought I'd mention!)

[✮ deathcore]

hey ! i was wondering..is this
costume okay ? i was going for a spooky lil
dead-ish / zombie type girl ? don't know if it's
good enough or appropriate.

[❤ Dipper ❤]

hey ! i was wondering..is this
costume okay ? i was going for a spooky lil
dead-ish / zombie type girl ? don't know if it's
good enough or appropriate.

Fab

[w0ah]

i just signed up yesterday and my inbox is already filled up with messages ( i think 14 lol ).
i was only gone for half the day o.0

( edit- still have to trick-or-treat myself )

[Musicality]

Well, oops.
I haven't been participating nearly as much as I've been meaning to. I've just kinda been stalking this thread XD

I've just actually had a life for once and it's really strange..

[✮ deathcore]

tick, tick, tick.....diiiing !

the sound of shoes and voices coming from every direction flooded everyones ears. amara had been awoken from her wonderland once again, and she was disappointed in herself to say the least.

most of her class periods are full of just daydreaming. if there was a daydreaming class she would most definitely get an a. amara has a mind that can wander for miles on end, and with that comes with consequences.

her favorite holiday was halloween, and the reason why was obvious. it was the only day of the year she could dress however she wants, be whoever she wants, and make her dreams come alive. the best part is ? she could be herself without being judged.
she left the cliche devil and cat costumes behind a long time ago, but every year her friends never failed to ask her to join in with their group costumes. amara always felt bad saying no, but she still had an amazing time on her own.

this year she wanted to do something different. something a little more..normal ?

she threw together some of her most interesting clothing pieces, and what she came out with was near unexplainable. unfortunately for her, explaining was usually a part of her trick or treating trips.

she stood in the mirror admiring her costume for a bit before she came to the conclusion that she was definitely dead. she was a girl, who was dead. but that wasn't good enough.

she went through many titles. zombie girl, evil angel, ghost hospital patient. way too many to list.

time was flying out of her grasp and she couldn't spend the whole night deciding her final title, so, she decided that she would be all of her ideas. each house she went to, she would say something different.

amara sighed, grabbed her pail, and headed out her door. she was treating this like an expedition, and like everyone else on the block, she wanted to get the most candy.

she waved goodbye to her mother and her little brother, and smiled to herself. she was content with her costume and her ever-changing title.

the time had come to say the words she had been waiting to say for a year..

* knock, knock *
"t-trick or treat ! "

does this story sound okay ?
please give me some constructive criticism or advice !

[halloween3110]

[quote="reb,,"][size=85][right]tick, tick, tick.....diiiing !

the sound of shoes and voices coming from every direction flooded everyones ears. amara had been awoken from her wonderland once again, and she was disappointed in herself to say the least.

----snip [quote]
A great story. A small thing you could do is start each sentence with a capital? otherwise I love it!
Well done

[tsukasa.]

Ah, is my Treat story okay? (aka the message I put when I give treats out) I need opinions!

tap... tap... tap. tap. tap. TAP. TAP. Noises of something--or someone walking get louder and louder. TAP. TAP. TAP... Creeeeeeek The door opens but nobody seems to be there. A swift breeze coming from the house pushes you backwards, and you shiver.
You notice on the door, there is bad handwriting that you can barley read.
A short dragon in a cloak and a large raven appear.
Behind them, there is a large candy bowl that not many have taken from,
so you can see that only those with the best costumes pass.

Now you could make out what the words on the door said,
"Those with great costumes succeed, those without costumes"
you couldn't read out the rest. You shiver in fear, knowing your
costume is good, but was it good enough?



The dragon approvingly nods at the raven several times and then
several times at you. "CAW! CAW-CAW!" the raven cawed
at you, and you step inside and walk towards the bowl. The dragon
takes the bowl/pillowcase and pours some of your favorite candies
into your basket. "Happy Halloween, -insert trick-or-treaters name-"
the Raven says, cocking his head back and laughs.
"Happy Halloween, -insert trick-or-treaters name-" the Dragon says and
pads away. The door shuts. creeeeeeeek. TAP.. TAP..
TAP... tap.... tap... tap. tap. tap. The tapping stops and you move
on to the next house.



ʏᴏᴜ'ᴠᴇ ʙᴇᴇɴ
ᴛʀᴇᴀᴛᴇᴅ ʙʏ
ᴊᴀʏғᴇᴀᴛʜᴇʀ's sᴛɪᴄᴋ

I'm currently working on my trick story, so I haven't given out any tricks

[rookie rook]

I want to join LOLO this year and I was wondering if I'm allowed to have a treat-giver and a trick or treater. I also want to see if these costumes will be good enough
Trick or Treater(s):
Treat-giver(s):(if allowed)

[Dalek]

I want to join LOLO this year and I was wondering if I'm allowed to have a treat-giver and a trick or treater. I also want to see if these costumes will be good enough
Trick or Treater(s):
Treat-giver(s):(if allowed)

Yes, you can have both and those dress-ups would definitely work, they look great!