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I tried c:
I labeled each thing I changed:
A - I made her muzzle shorter and showed her tooth.
B - I made her ears a little larger.
C - I changed her hair.
D - I think you were inspired by the Animal Jam eye? It looks really similar to it. Anyways, I lowered it and redrew it in my style.
E - I made the front legs a little wider.
F (why are there two? ignore the F near the wing!) - Your anatomy was a little off with the back leg. Mine isn't that clear to see but I encourage you to take a look at this picture.
G - Shade's body seems a little too long.
H - I made her wings more detailed. I suck at drawing wings so please don't reference my wing.

Also, I don't see any sketches or anything. I'm assuming that you did this all on one layer so I recommend having one layer for the sketch, lines, background, color, and anything else that you want to add to your drawing. I like to color my drawings in "coloring book style", meaning I have my lines on one layer and I color my drawing in on the layer below it, instead of using the fill bucket.

I hope this is useful!

[Beckrabbit]

Thank you so much! Although I wasn't inspired by the AJ eye, I just don't know how to draw eyes. Plus, your wings are beautiful, and sometimes better than mine. I draw a lot better on paper, so yeah. Some of this helped me, thank you! <3