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[demonsdays]

oooh, no unfortunately i'll have to make her one
in the meantime, maybe you could do this gal instead? https://toyhou.se/1521981.juno

[toy20243]

Oh i love your art <3

On this piece my main concern is her left leg. When you look at her shoes they look about the same size, but when you look up at her legs it almost looks like you cut one in half and popped it into a slightly different pose. If we were to remove that leg it would look like shes leaning forwards in excitement. When we pop it back on im assuming shes doing a slightly swivel like pose, so when doing that pose i suggest to focus on her thighs first, when you look at them they seem to be two very different sizes, even though they are fairly close to each other and should be similar sizes once you get that down the rest of the leg sizing should be easy! Now onto her head. if you remove her face she seems to be facing another direction than she is with her face, for example when you take a lego person and just swivel their wig to the side a bit, it looks okay but akward at the same time. Then from where im assuming her skull is the horn appears to be... directly ontop of her head... I suggest using multiple different layers so you can 'remove pieces' of her so you can see how she could look with different faces and ect. you can also flip the art piece around everyone and a while to check on portions! It helps me a LOT.

[cocogerber13]

Hello! I already really like your art, so I hope my advice can help! ^^

(For overall figure drawing, I find this video kind of helpful!)


Onto this piece, though- while I do like the style and stance overall, I do think there are a few parts that had a few unnecessary lines. Exaggerating parts of a drawing art good for expression, but for a regular drawing they aren’t always needed (the points on the arm and hand are a part of that). While there is a difference between the arm and forearm and a bump near the wrist in that positioning, they usually aren’t all that obvious. There still should be a different in thickness of the arm itself, but the lines to the side (in my opinion) stand out a bit more than they need to. As for the legs, there is a slight curve on the front part, but usually they are more straight because of the bone (I know that this bit is kind of referring back to more realistic anatomy, but it also helps the posture in drawings to look better IMO). Also, the overall proportions seem okay to me, but the hand does seem a bit big to me.


I really like how you shade as well, and though I’m not completely sure what kind of shading you are looking into doing, whenever I do soft-cell shading, I tend to end up drawing over the shading with a very slight different shade/intensity where I want it to get dark and continue doing that until I feel the shadow goes where I want it to before using a blur brush. Idk if it’s just the program I use for not, but the blending and blur brushes change the actual colour (like light brown to darker brown turns to red the more I use the tool?) and drawing over the shadows with different shades works for me.

I hope this helped a bit!

[Ichi Mitsugi]

oooh, no unfortunately i'll have to make her one
in the meantime, maybe you could do this gal instead? https://toyhou.se/1521981.juno

sure, I'll get around to it ^w^!

[Ichi Mitsugi]

Oh i love your art <3

On this piece my main concern is her left leg. When you look at her shoes they look about the same size, but when you look up at her legs it almost looks like you cut one in half and popped it into a slightly different pose. If we were to remove that leg it would look like shes leaning forwards in excitement. When we pop it back on im assuming shes doing a slightly swivel like pose, so when doing that pose i suggest to focus on her thighs first, when you look at them they seem to be two very different sizes, even though they are fairly close to each other and should be similar sizes once you get that down the rest of the leg sizing should be easy! Now onto her head. if you remove her face she seems to be facing another direction than she is with her face, for example when you take a lego person and just swivel their wig to the side a bit, it looks okay but akward at the same time. Then from where im assuming her skull is the horn appears to be... directly ontop of her head... I suggest using multiple different layers so you can 'remove pieces' of her so you can see how she could look with different faces and ect. you can also flip the art piece around everyone and a while to check on portions! It helps me a LOT.

★★★★★★★ 7 stars~
You see, the thing is she is leaning forward ;w; she's doing the florina or gordin thingy (sort of). I kinda wanted her to be dragging one of her legs behind her but even then, yeah that thigh shouldn't be so small ^^; I should try and get better at drawing perspective. I didn't copy-paste the legs either since I thought one leg was more sharper (pointy? idk, edges aren't as smooth) than the other.
I also think the head and face are weird and I'm still trying to figure out how to place those :D
I'm also fairly certain I mentioned her horn being at the top of her head earlier when someone mentioned something about the ears and yes her horn is suppose to be closer to the top of her head than her forehead, although I'm thinking about moving it lower since it looks weird on her brother counterpart and I need them to twin.

Overall not bad~ Lemme know what art type you want and send your reffy, too~~

[Ichi Mitsugi]

Hello! I already really like your art, so I hope my advice can help! ^^

(For overall figure drawing, I find this video kind of helpful!)


Onto this piece, though- while I do like the style and stance overall, I do think there are a few parts that had a few unnecessary lines. Exaggerating parts of a drawing art good for expression, but for a regular drawing they aren’t always needed (the points on the arm and hand are a part of that). While there is a difference between the arm and forearm and a bump near the wrist in that positioning, they usually aren’t all that obvious. There still should be a different in thickness of the arm itself, but the lines to the side (in my opinion) stand out a bit more than they need to. As for the legs, there is a slight curve on the front part, but usually they are more straight because of the bone (I know that this bit is kind of referring back to more realistic anatomy, but it also helps the posture in drawings to look better IMO). Also, the overall proportions seem okay to me, but the hand does seem a bit big to me.


I really like how you shade as well, and though I’m not completely sure what kind of shading you are looking into doing, whenever I do soft-cell shading, I tend to end up drawing over the shading with a very slight different shade/intensity where I want it to get dark and continue doing that until I feel the shadow goes where I want it to before using a blur brush. Idk if it’s just the program I use for not, but the blending and blur brushes change the actual colour (like light brown to darker brown turns to red the more I use the tool?) and drawing over the shadows with different shades works for me.

I hope this helped a bit!

★★★★★★★★ 8 stars!
I remember someone mentioning how the legs are straight on the inside, but I don't think too many people mentioned the arms and especially the wrist, and now looking back at it I can't unsee it owo
Also don't feel bad about referring back to realistic anatomy, I'm just not a fan of people telling me I need to draw realistic first before I can do anything else.<-- I'll leave this in bold in case anybody comes scrolling by so they can see this since I'm not good at clarifying.
Overall anatomy tips are good~ I also like the video -w-~
For shading I'm not actually looking to get into soft-cell shading, I really like Keeggy'sstyle overall and pretty much want to inherit those godly skills. It's why I've been deferring back to solid cell shading as of late, I think it'd be a lot better to adjust that habit now than later down on the road.
Overall also good job! Lemme know what type of art you want and send a reffy too~

[cocogerber13]

Thanks so much, and I’m glad I could help! ^^ I totally understand the shading part!

Could I please have a halfbod of this girl? I’m not picky about what she’s wearing or anything, but don’t be afraid to ask if you need anything! Thank you again! ^^

[toy20243]

I just got this babe <3 a head shot or a chibi bust of her would be amazing <3 (though if you do a bust ignore her pink outfit thingy... i plan on giving her a kelp like bra and skirt... just dont have it drawn up yet lol)
https://sta.sh/01jl6jhmsg8d

[Ichi Mitsugi]

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I'm baaaaack~ <3

[Ichi Mitsugi]

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