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Hidden in a trap by supersuki31

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Hidden in a trap

Postby supersuki31 » Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:41 pm

So this is my clownfish. It is my first post in intermediate, does it deserve to be here? Sooo yeah, the timer is only a little bit off. Enjoy! Comments and crit would be great!

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Re: Hidden in a trap

Postby Meriadoc Brandybuck » Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:42 pm

This really good! The only thing would be to make the mouth a little bit lower or open.
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Theoden wrote:Where now are the horse and the rider? Where is the horn that was blowing?
Where is the helm and the hauberk, and the bright hair flowing?
Where is the harp on the harpstring, and the red fire glowing?
Where is the spring and the harvest and the tall corn growing?
They have passed like rain on the mountain, like a wind in the meadow;
The days have gone down in the West behind the hills into shadow.
Who shall gather the smoke of the deadwood burning,
Or behold the flowing years from the Sea returning?
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Re: Hidden in a trap

Postby supersuki31 » Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:43 pm

Ok, thank you, i will do that now.

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Re: Hidden in a trap

Postby supersuki31 » Fri Jan 20, 2012 7:10 pm

Bump?

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Re: Hidden in a trap

Postby Vash the Stampede » Fri Jan 20, 2012 7:11 pm

Personally, when drawing fish, unless they are LARGE fish or depending on species, sometimes I give them no mouth at all! But that's a stylistic preference and it depends on the species as I said--neon tetras yes, blind cave fish... really need mouths! You did a good job on this ^^
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Re: Hidden in a trap

Postby supersuki31 » Fri Jan 20, 2012 7:14 pm

Thank you! And yes, blind cave fish probably do need mouths lol!

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Re: Hidden in a trap

Postby supersuki31 » Fri Jan 20, 2012 7:33 pm

Bump?

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Re: Hidden in a trap

Postby supersuki31 » Fri Jan 20, 2012 7:48 pm

Bump!?

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Re: Hidden in a trap

Postby supersuki31 » Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:04 pm

bump, anyone?

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Re: Hidden in a trap

Postby beetlebottle » Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:54 pm

Wow! yes indeed keep drawing fish, youre really good at drawing fishies!
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