[SketchyBunny]

Hi! This is my first time posting in intermediate! I like it and I worked really hard on it, but if it is not intermediate worthy then mods, feel free to move it to beginners

[Beee]

Crit: Try improving on your feathered wings. Try using thinner lines, since yours show that you went over them. I can see gaps in the lines. For the sun and halo, burn and dodge don't work well... try using white and black on another layer and change the opacity or in your coloring layer try using darker and lighter colors. I guess the eyes need imporving too, but I can't help much with that. I really do like it, but I don't think it's ready for intermediate just yet. keep up the good work

[SketchyBunny]

Thanks:)

[Oxycaine]

This needs to be moved to begginers.

It's very lovely though.

[kavlri]

This needs to be moved to begginers.

It's very lovely though.

There's no need to tell them it needs to be move, it's up to the mod to decide, especially when they already know it might be move.

As ♥Xena♥ have said, dodge and burn don't work very well, I suggest try not to use them at all if you can(I use to use them a lot too). Using layers also make it a lot easier when it comes to editing or painting over things. If you draw everything in a separate layers(sun one one layer, halo on another layer, background on another etc.), if you need to remove one of them, the picture will not be ruin. You have a lot of potential, keep practicing, I know you'll be here one day.

[SketchyBunny]

Thank you guys a lot... I'm happy I got lots of good advice about it:)