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left behind by camiecat03

Artist camiecat03 [gallery]
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left behind

Postby camiecat03 » Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:15 am

i chase the trail you leave behind,
praying you'll come back to me,
but your feathers are all i find,
my tears will fall were ever i be,
i yell to you but i know your kind,
through my broken heart i see,
i loved you and you used me,
figuring this out in my mind,
i still run and hoping it's you i find.
this is just something from boredom i drew so please comment and critics welcome.
thanks for reading
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Re: left behind

Postby Dawny05~008 » Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:17 am

cool! i like it :3 my only crit would be that the arms look kind of strange what with being curved instead of bending at the elbow, and the right arm looks shorter than the left. other than that, this is neat!
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Re: left behind

Postby camiecat03 » Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:19 am

yeah arms and hands are my weakness :oops: but i'm working on it thanks for replying
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Re: left behind

Postby Dawny05~008 » Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:23 am

no problem :3 yeah, i fail at drawing hands *dies*
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Re: left behind

Postby camiecat03 » Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:41 am

i edited it but accidently pushed color.
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