This is my character Ashclaw, he follows Tigerstar. He has killed cats and after killing his sister Blossompelt recently, is regreting following Tigerstar,but cannot help but kill more cats.
Ashclaw stalked through the shadows, looking for his sister out on hunting patrol. In minutes, she came by, her fur brushing the brambles that he was hiding in. He stood up, showing himself. Blossompelt's smile lessened and she said,"Oh, Ashclaw, you are here because?" Ashclaw dipped his head as a tear slid down his cheeck. He looked up and as she saw it,she stepped backwards. Ashclaw slid his claws out and before Blossompelt could do anything, he slid them across her neck. She started to collapse to the ground. "Why.....why.....why....." he heard the rest of the patrol coming, and have rolled in garlic before (A trick he learned from the medicine cat) his scent was unreadable. He ran, he ran and ran and ran.He wasn't only running away from being caught,but running away from what he had done. The look on his sister's face haunted him. As he came back the River Clan, Tigerstar met him. Tigerstar said,"How did it go?" Ashclaw walked right past him. Tigerstar just said,"Well then. I will ask later."and dissappeared.

