[Kite]

WIPWIPWIPWIP

Yup, its a wip. The only reason I'm posting is to get some help from Oofay, who is trying to teach me his tips x] Gosh, its so haaard!

Ref

[Inkspiration]

It is a beautiful dead/dying zombie girl! Was that what you were going for? It's really nice!

[Prince of Awesome]

Cool, but slightly creepy XD
Better than Id ever do

[Kite]

Erm... Its supposed to be old-timey xD And Yes, she does look dead. Sorry bout that -_-

[Inkspiration]

Oh no, don't be sorry! I think it's awesome! Its like an old fashioned cameo with a girl from that time period actually in the clothes! I love love it, but if dead wasn't what you were going for then PLEASE save a copy of the dead one for us! If you want to make her look alive pick a warm, and not olivey skin tone. And flesh out her nose. If you want gorgeous zombie vintage babe, you're well on your way. I guess, either way, your well on your way, since it's a lovely face base.

[Kite]

Lol thanks for the tips ^^ I'll flesh out the dead areas eventually...

[Inkspiration]

But you'll leave a copy of it this way up here, right, right?! ^^

[troblsomtwins829]

Going off the ref-attempt comparison....

Coloring's off, angle isn't quite right, hair... needs more POOF! (XD) and that is a VERY!! long neck. the ref too, very long neck.

But as a start, very nice

[Kite]

Ah, thank you for the crits ^^ I'm not done with the hair, and
I will ad some more fleshy colors to her eventually. This is the first time drawing people on oekaki and I can already tell it won't ever be my specialty xD

[Nimrod97]

The nose seems to be your trouble point, it looks kind of flat, almost like he who's name shall not be spoken off of harry potter haha.