Here's a part from the first chapter.
Caitlin was 14 when she mysteriously 'Died', everybody said it was her boyfriend, infact, he only found out about her death weeks after the police found her.
Caitlin met her best friend Janet, aged five when she started playschool. They went everywhere together, that was until caitlin met Robbie, a Hot, Blonde, Surfer when she was 12. They started dating immediatley and fell in love, though Janet didn't like the way Robbie and Caitlin were always toghether. For 2 years Janet watched Robbie cuddle her bestfriend, and she hated that.
This is where the chapter ends, dramatic though, i am right?
Tammy Lover<3
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