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redline please? by BlueKestrel

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redline please?

Postby BlueKestrel » Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:25 pm

soo... this is my first REAL attempt at drawing a cat.. :P dont laugh *eye twitch*
it would be awesome if a few people redlined this :mrgreen:
comments and crits welcome :)

dont be mean to my fail cat xD jkjk im open to anything
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Re: redline please?

Postby Veggiegirl » Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:29 pm

Red-line? Why? That cat is purrfect! (Ohmygod I have an addiction to puns, I can't give them up, sorry.) I don't see anything wrong with it! P.S. - I looked in your gallery, and I'd just like to say all of your art is amazing. :3
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Re: redline please?

Postby arcticwolf » Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:30 pm

The head and the left hind foot looks a bit awkward, but besides that, it's great.
(I'd redline, but I don't have my tablet with me.)
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Re: redline please?

Postby BlueKestrel » Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:32 pm

Veggiegirl wrote:Red-line? Why? That cat is purrfect! (Ohmygod I have an addiction to puns, I can't give them up, sorry.) I don't see anything wrong with it! P.S. - I looked in your gallery, and I'd just like to say all of your art is amazing. :3


haha thanks :) nice pun x3

arcticwolf wrote:The head and the left hind foot looks a bit awkward, but besides that, it's great.
(I'd redline, but I don't have my tablet with me.)


yeah i can see the face is wrong but i have no idea how to fix it :P ill add you to the list for when you get your tablet back if you want :3
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Re: redline please?

Postby Deschy » Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:42 pm

O_O Tha's so awesome except you could make the neck a tiny bit shorter...
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Re: redline please?

Postby BlueKestrel » Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:45 pm

deschaneli wrote:O_O Tha's so awesome except you could make the neck a tiny bit shorter...


yeah im used to drawing long necks on horses so it looked so weird xD *not a good excuse*
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Re: redline please?

Postby Breezeye » Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:49 pm

The tail could be thicker.
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Re: redline please?

Postby BlueKestrel » Wed Dec 07, 2011 3:30 pm

would anyone like to actually redline this? its easier to see my mistakes drawn out : P im not a writing kinda person
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Postby Breezeye » Wed Dec 07, 2011 3:51 pm

I would, but I can't draw to save my life.
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Re: redline please?

Postby Novie Kenari » Wed Dec 07, 2011 4:16 pm

it looks great owl, but i think you made the shoulders a little wolf like, and the head could use a little work ^^
(may i redline again? lol)
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