[sardonicSeldom]

Yes. They are in a mystical meadow overlooking a cliff and there are firefly's in it.
Yes. Saturn/Sebastian is wearing khakis and has a bedhead.
And yes. Bulinda is human and sleeping.

Yea its poorly drawn compared to all the drawings in intermediate, but there is NOTHING in editable oekaki for an anime couple. And if there is, it probably doesn't have Bastian's awesome bedhead. XD I like Bulinda's lipstick. (Sorry, random thought.) It's kinda sad cause I don't want to do shading and lighting, but I'm tired and lazy, so I might do it later.

((Timer's off, so who knows how long it took!!!! It was an on and off thing, cause I kept it up.))

[sardonicSeldom]

Nothing? -.- Gosh I know its not AMAZING like you people are used to seeing, but come on! D:

[Yuki.]

I think its cute. Their anatomy is well done, but I do think you could fix up the shading a little. You should focus on the folds in the clothes and where the shading is. Overall its darn good, just keep practicing ^^
~Snow

[sardonicSeldom]

:O I feel stupid now... I knew I forgot something on the clothes. And I'll try and do the shading tomorrow.

[Yuki.]

The best way to achieve more progress in your drawings is to either, one, keep drawing. Experiment with things your unsure about. Then, improve from your mistakes. Or two, study other anime. See how they shade and learn from it. Again, beautiful drawing ^^
~Snow

[sardonicSeldom]

Thank you for your help and compliments! Usually people don't post anything when I want someone to give me feedback on my drawings, but I'm glad someone finally did! Thanks Snow! ^u^

[Yuki.]

No problem. Everyone's a wonderful drawer, its just the practice makes it better. I'm glad I could help, and I look forward to some of your other drawings ^^
~Snow

[LOTR Addict]

Sorry, I don't have any critique because I suck at drawing...Anyways, I really like this drawing. It's really cute and a lot better than I could do with a pencil and paper. xD Love it! <3