[Lierre]

*yawn* I am tired. Just about 4am where I am.

Anyways, I was just practicing humans kissing profile. I need WAY more practice with manga. Yikes.


I would like some crits on this. I'd like some tips on ears and noses. :3

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Aw, what a cute couple. <3

The girl's neck looks a bit thick, they usually have a slender (not to thin, though! Otherwise it won't be able to support the head) neck than guys. The girl's ear is a bit big, too. Take this for example, that's the usual size of a girl's ear. c:

The way you drew the guy is almost perfect, (I'm a bit iffy about the line between the chin and the ear) but the girl needs to have some small adjustments. The girl's look a tad smaller than the guy and her chin is too rounded, (and the guy's chin is a little too pointy) the girl's chin needs to be a bit pointy, and the guy's chin should be slightly rounded.

[Harpalyce]

I would be happy to try to redline, even if I'm not the best at Anime/Manga style. Drawing people kissing is really hard, so really practice is all I can recommend I'm afraid!

[Lierre]

Thanks for criticism! You're both very helpful! I'll add your name in, Harpalyce. Then I'll redline my own work using Monochrome's tips. c: Thanks again!