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WIP fpr luna on TDF. need advice by .Pardalis.

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WIP fpr luna on TDF. need advice

Postby .Pardalis. » Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:24 pm

Ok so I've never drawn a fox before and it looks weird to me.
Obviously I will color in, shade and highlight he other arm. And I plan to add more ticking to the fur on the back and face...and fill in the grass.

Now..what do I do to make him look more ..foxy?
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Re: WIP fpr luna on TDF. need advice

Postby robyn » Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:27 pm

I would blur the tail a bit, and use the smuge tool on the tip ;)
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Re: WIP fpr luna on TDF. need advice

Postby .Pardalis. » Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:28 pm

I see what you mean, I'll give that a try.
I was trying to give it texture, but it looked strange.

the anatomy looks off too :/
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Re: WIP fpr luna on TDF. need advice

Postby Wilte » Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:38 pm

Wow, this looks really great!
I like the detail you are adding to your picture. :)

As for the anatomy, it looks good! If anything, maybe thin the muzzle a little, and sort of narrow it towards the nose? A reference for the head might help you tweak things if you think it needs any changing. Overall, it looks very nice. :) Wonderful work!
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Re: WIP fpr luna on TDF. need advice

Postby .Pardalis. » Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:41 pm

thank you ^ ^
I think this too thick muzzle thing carries over from horses and wolves . (that's what I usually draw)
I have the same problem when drawing cats. *sigh*
good thing for layers and the eraser tool.
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Re: WIP fpr luna on TDF. need advice

Postby .Pardalis. » Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:07 pm

SO I added more color/highlights/lowlights and texture. Also colored in the arm and modified the muzzle. I added grass...still looks off...
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