Even though i love Midnight's pose i sucked at drawing her that way.
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Comic version:
Midnight: "Leave my pup alone!" she says while snarling
Storm(that's the leaping wolf's name): "Never!"
Story version: (it really pays off if you read this version)
Midight heard her fragile daughter scream out her name. She then scented something she had before... Storm. Storm was Moony's and her other pup's real father. She had left him though before she had her pups. Midnight snarled and jumped in front of Moony in a protective stance. She was growling and snarling visoucly and Storm landed a few feet in front of her. "Leave my pup allone!" she said angirly. "Never!" Storm shouted back and then he leapt again. Storm was hugry with revenge he wouldn't stop into all Midnight's pups were dead so he could have her back.
Again guys i need 3 likes to continue this comic.
Lovler Moon (C) me.













