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WIP by zytin

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Time spent 1 hour, 54 minutes
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WIP

Postby zytin » Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:47 pm

I haven't Oekaki'ed in a very long time, and I realized that all of my older things were terrible, so here's to a new start!
Taking a break for now, and I decided to post this now to see if I could get any critiques on the face before I get too far into the picture, so don't be afraid to point something out if something doesn't look right. c:

The ref is this picture
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lst9l ... o1_500.jpg

And also before I get too far into the picture, I was wondering if a cigarette would be appropriate for Oekaki, I wouldn't want to offend anyone by putting one in here, but it would add to the effect of the picture. c:
Thanks for reading, and please comment!

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Liking my picture is great, but I value comments more, even if they have something negative to say about it.
Please do not be afraid to post your opinion on it.
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Re: WIP

Postby zytin » Sat Nov 05, 2011 3:42 pm

Bump~
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Re: WIP

Postby zytin » Sun Nov 06, 2011 2:09 am

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Re: WIP

Postby zytin » Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:06 am

*sigh* last bump. I didn't think it sucked that much. I suppose I won't be finishing this
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Re: WIP

Postby . : Milotic : . » Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:10 am

its not bad at all but I've never even seen it until now, and I want to see it done plz
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Re: WIP

Postby असंतोष » Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:10 am

It doesn't suck. I love it. <3
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There was a time that the pieces fit, but I watched them fall away
Mildewed and smoldering, strangled by our coveting
I've done the math enough to know the dangers
of our second guessing
Doomed to crumble unless we grow,
and strengthen our communication... -Schism, by Tool

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