by CosmicNeurax » Fri Nov 04, 2011 10:53 am
It's really good but I feel like you could have gone so much further into detail with an idea like that. Ghost nightmare.
Night --> Darkness, shadows
Mare --> female horse, well obviously you have the horse part xD
Ghost --> There's a lot you could do with that, make the horse slightly transparent
All just creative ideas, it's really good :3
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