[AngelTheGenie]

(Note:These are my characters and storyline for this is mine as well. I hope you Enjoy!)
(NOTE: Constructive Criticism Only Please Thank You)

Whiteforest:You will not be staying here Blood. Leave.
Blood:I will rule this forest whether I murder others and you to get what I want.
Whiteforest:You won't harm one cat Blood! Never will you lay a claw on them!
Blood:*laughs* As you wish to say, I will succeed.
Whiteforest:Leave Blood! Now!
Blood:No, not without a fight!
Whiteforest:Then die! *leaps forward*
Blood:*laughs and slashed his nose*
Whiteforest:*yelps a little and leaps back* You won't live Blood!
Blood:*evil laugh*


Hope you Enjoyed! ^^


EDIT:Guys, this is not from warriors. I honestly have never heard of warriors except through friends who are fans and tell me about these characters. They dont tell me plotline, they only tell me characters. One told me schourge has a white left paw and the one showing that is the left paw is not white and NONE of the paws are white. His chest is also a darker grey also which its supposed to be. The collar is NOT purple it is red. ALSO scourges eyes were BLUE not golden/yellow. As for whiteforest, he has hints of grey in his fur along with a grey undereye marking which I tried to draw. Please dont mistaken them for the warrior cats when I have never heard of the story completely and only have been told character names. I had to get a call from a friend about this to clarify who was who.......thank you and please keep arguing, if any, to a minimum or I may ask the mods to remove this because of it.....Thank you

[~Loki~]

Nice drawing but... *shifts uncomfortably* you got this from the Warriors series, didn't you? you just changed it slightly...

[AngelTheGenie]

Actually I honestly have never heard of the warriors series......If this is from the series it has to be a coincidence.....

[~Loki~]

mhmmm... because there is an evil cat who is a member of Bloodclan who wants to take over the forest and he will only fight. And He looks exactely like that black cat, collar and everything. And there is also a white cat named Whitestorm who is the deputy of the good clan, Thunderclan, who opposes Bloodclan.

Hehe... sorry if I wrongly accused you, but it is just so similar...

[AngelTheGenie]

Yeah I see, by what you tell me, what you mean haha. It's sounds like I did. From my book Whiteforest and Blood are brothers so thats a huge difference there. Plus Blood had the idea from stories about other cats who attempted to do it and is trying to use the others as examples, plus the 'clans' are different too haha So yeah. Thanks for posting anyways.

[dhlkugzi]

Is the cat's name Whiteforest or Whitestorm? It switches halfway through.

[AngelTheGenie]

Whoops haha Its Whiteforest I am fixing that now

[Buddyboy]

make things a little bit more detailed. besides that it looks absolutely great though.

[AngelTheGenie]

Thank you very much I will edit this later on when I am not busy ^^

[princeoftoysoldiers]

good job, but i think blood resembles Scourge a little too much. Maybe tweek his design a bit, like maybe a white chest spot, and different colored collar. that way fans wont, you know, get mad. just a suggestion!