The forehead you drew is almost a bump, so it needs to be flatter and further past the ears. The dogs' eye needs to be smaller and also needs to have a tear duct. Dog eye
The ears need be more smooth and tall. Dog ear
You also need to fix the nose. Here is a good picture to reference- Dog nose
The dog also needs to have a larger chest, and don't forget the fur!
Hope this helped you. ^.^
