I hope I helped a bit with those certain parts. x3 They kind of bugged me, but overall I love you're art style. <3 Unique, very unique. ^^
And, if you can't read the image, this is what I wrote;
- The head and nose bridge slope are parallel.
- Smaller back front paw. x3 Also, try not to let the ankle be touching the ground, that'd be like walking on our ankles or wrists... Ow. xD
- Try not to make the tail so stiff~ Unless, you know, it's in a dominance position or whatever. c:
- & try to have the fur a bit more loose if you wanted.
Second redline, thank you for letting me~ :3




