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Redlining! by Chii-sai

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Artist Chii-sai [gallery]
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Redlining!

Postby Chii-sai » Fri Sep 23, 2011 4:48 pm

Well, decided to help out 8D And Deliean came along as well. Didn't add her spots... oh well. Anyway... only a few points I'd like to make!! Other wise, really nice!

1. Face: The snout you had was just a bit long- try shortening it out and beefing it up- it's fairly long. Ears were good, but round them out a bit more- and you can't forget the signature ears floofs! And making the cheek bone line start from the ear helps give the face more shape. Practice with nose a bit- fool around with different shapes and sizes. At first they're hard to get, but once you've got them, they're easy! Try an outlanders' nose for some difficulty.

2. Upper Body: Don't forget the the end of the shoulder blade doesn't stop till you reach the top of the back- it makes the anatomy seem more realistic. And try not to draw the arms bent- they run straight down to the paws, only at a slight slant inwards.

3. Back and Stomach: The back was pretty good, although a bit long for the rest of the body. The stomach was a bit too flat- add in a ribcage.

4. Lower Body: The back legs don't need to be quite as thick- unlike their cousin the house cat, lions have thin, muscular legs that are pretty long.

That's all 8D I hope this helps a bit!!
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Re: Redlining!

Postby Solarizing » Sat Sep 24, 2011 4:21 am

Great thanks for the tips! :3
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