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Another lineart

Postby Novie Kenari » Sun Sep 18, 2011 9:03 am

it is easier to draw the body, but now im not happy with the chest or head XP
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Re: Another lineart

Postby If I said... » Sun Sep 18, 2011 9:17 am

Nah, it's good!
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Re: Another lineart

Postby Neara » Sun Sep 18, 2011 10:01 am

Red-Lining Requested

Yes i agree, the chest is too far up, where ever the chest ends the belly behind the front leg will be in the same line as where the chest ended. Also you seem to warp the face alot by putting the eye in the cheek area of the face, remember that. and the mouth you make go too far down giving the face a disproportioned look.. Wolves are pretty different from regular dogs who have more of a loose lip and narrow face. Where the Wolf has a more forward, round and wide face. The best dogs to reference from if you are around them would be husky, german shepherd, Alaskan Malamute, or any dog with ears that stand up. Dogs with erect ears tend to all have a slender agile body type like the wolf, though the wolf is built a bit stronger and heftier. As for the paws they are better but still not their yet. Im sure taking a look at the lines i drew will speak louder than my words so here we are :}

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Re: Another lineart

Postby Neara » Tue Sep 20, 2011 7:17 pm

I Cant do attachments for PM's so her is the redline you requested :} hope it helps as you say :D

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