R.C.'s name: Battlecry
Age: 15
Gender:male
Ranking:used to be a claw but promoted to be a comander
Personality: tough will do anything to protect the ones he loves
Short Story: Battlecry was alone, and cold, and hungery. He was lost, compleatly and utterly lost,all he knew was that he was in a forest some where 7 days away from camp, well thats what he thought and if thats were camp still was...
...He had been walking around in circles for days. There was a thunderclap in the distance, and the gently breeze which had been there all day started to get stronger. The rain started steadly falling,
'And now its raining, could life get any worse?' The rain was pelting down now and the wind started to pick up. As he neared the corner he heard a noise, he stopped. 'Whos there?!' comanded Battlecry, he heard the leaves all around him crunching under foot, it sounded like he was being circled... Just then there was a lightening strike and for that brief few seconds the forest around him lit up. It was like time itself had stopped, the rain didn't seem to matter any more, only the light, Its so beautiful thought Battlecry.
But it was over, and then he was attacked, It was like some kind of big cat like a sabertooth but they where extinct right? All he saw was a dark shape tearing at his flesh and kicking him.
He didn't see what it was but someone or something was helping him, The creature disapeared.
He felt blood trickle down the side of his face his vision started to go fussy. He saw another rage claw but this one looked different,It was bright white so bright it seemed to glow he had the darkest eyes almost black, with him there was a Bright blue rage claw with dark blue sports like a leopoard and she had the greenest eyes. There was five of them all different not like his kind but they were,unless they where... ....he didn't want to think about it.
The white one said something... It sounded like don't worry??
and
everything
went
black.
When he woke up he was lying on the forest floor, the leaves were damp from the storm and it was misty. He lay there for a moment, he watched a droplet of water slide down a long piece of grass. He got up slowly and slowly made his way over to a pool of cool water, he plunged his face into the water and took a long, deep glup. When he stood up he looked at himself something was different, his senses were much more acute. He looked at him self in the pool, he was no longer black all over with a scar over his face, he was now beautiful, he was dark grey with blue striped legs and greeny blue eyes, his coat had blue hints in it and he had a white patch covering his back.
hope you like my first story not bad but not good tell me if you think it needs to be improved
