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Anyone up for redlining? o3o by palmsprout

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Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby palmsprout » Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:59 pm

Well, I'm hoping to make my anatomy better. Sooo... anyone want to help me? I also may be up to learning other people's styles as well. x3
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Re: Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby feather_light_flight » Tue Sep 06, 2011 1:12 pm

Lil suggestion. Make the lower stomach curve upwards more. So that the cat looks sleeker.
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Re: Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby Sdlhf » Tue Sep 06, 2011 1:36 pm

I would be glad to redline it, although I don't see too many mistakes. :)
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Re: Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby varoujan » Tue Sep 06, 2011 1:38 pm

I wouldn't mind redlining. I will do it tomorrow if you make it so I can edit it.
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Re: Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby young blood. » Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:27 pm

I'll red-line for you! Please add me, and I'll help! :)








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Re: Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby .:Night Fury:. » Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:31 pm

I'd like to help. c:
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Re: Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby palmsprout » Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:41 pm

Added you all. :3
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Re: Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby brian emo » Wed Sep 07, 2011 7:57 am

I'll help ouo b
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Re: Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby bonk » Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:23 am

I'd redline, but I suck at art.
But one crit: The whole shape seems a bit... large. If you make the arms and legs a bit smaller, then you're good. You appear to have used the front torso's sketch circle thing (You know what I mean) as the upper base of the arm. Try to make that and the belly skinnier.
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Re: Anyone up for redlining? o3o

Postby buttercat, » Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:57 am

I'll help you out! I'm better at wolves, but cats are my next best thing ^^


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