Any critique for me?
Should have done a better lineart to practice on :L
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Just testing some shadow by Alerion
| Artist | Alerion [gallery] |
| Time spent | 1 hour, 4 minutes |
| Drawing sessions | 1 |
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Re: Just testing some shadow
by Alaska. » Sun Sep 04, 2011 2:48 am
The only thing I could say is that maybe the highlight under the wolf's right eye could be a little bigger? I think it is spot on though! You are a great artist.
I can't see past my own nose,
I'm seeing everything in slo-mo
Look out below crashing down to the ground
just like a vertical locomotive
That's a train, am I painting the picture that's in my brain?
A train from the sky, locomotive, my motives are insane
My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play
While you're doing fine, there's some people and I
Who have a really tough time getting through this life
So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.
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I'm seeing everything in slo-mo
Look out below crashing down to the ground
just like a vertical locomotive
That's a train, am I painting the picture that's in my brain?
A train from the sky, locomotive, my motives are insane
My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play
While you're doing fine, there's some people and I
Who have a really tough time getting through this life
So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.
Links:
•Art Shop (Closed/inactive)
•My characters
•WOI FANCLUB!
•My Deviantart page
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