[Angry.Jackal]

this is basically riverclan in different times in crookedstar's life, because i am reading crookedstar's promise. ao, the two apprentices in the top left corner are Softpaw and Whitepaw, who were apprentices when Crookedstar was born. the dark brown cat close to the middle of the page is Mudfur, the medicine cat when Crookedstar was leader. next to him is Brambleberry, the medicine cat that was helping crookedstar through his injury and most of the rest of his life after that. the one next to the prey pile is Stonefur, bluestars son. the two cats at the bottom are Blackclaw the warrior and Graypool the elder. the three kits are Volekit, Petalkit, and Beetlekit is the darker one. They were kits a moon older than Crookedstar was. the queen beside them is Mosspelt, she was a queen when Crookedstar lead his clan. the blue-eyed cat is Mistyfoot, bluestar's daughter, the brown cat above her is Loudbelly and the gray cat beside him is Graystripe, who was in Riverclan for a while. the yellow spotted cat is Leopardfur(star) and the one at the top is Crookedstar, looking back on his life. I DONT OWN ANYTHING OR ANYONE IN THIS PICTURE!

[Angry.Jackal]

any comments?

[Angry.Jackal]

no critiques? at all?

[Angry.Jackal]

thanks. i dont like it very much. it looks cooler with a background, but my computer is jacked up.

[cryonic.]

I think this is really good