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Redlining by Taurus_Primus

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Redlining

Postby Taurus_Primus » Fri Sep 02, 2011 12:43 pm

I hope this helps a bit, I had to put letters and numbers 'cause I can't write on oekaki very well.

(checkmark) I like how you added whiskers to the eyebrows too. Most people forget to do that! :D

1. Kittens have short backs, but adults usually have longer, sloping backs.

2. The forehead needs to come a bit out more and with more of a soft, sloping line.

3. I love the curvature of the back legs! I suck at leg curvature. But the heels need to come out more.

4. You got the tail sloping right, but it needs to be a tad longer.

5. The back curves in between the shoulder blades, but then it has a soft curve out.

6. The top of the head has some curve, but is relatively flat.

7. The tummy doesn't go in much, it's usually big and fluffy :3

8. The rounded triangle-like shape at the end is the gums. They don't show much, but are usually seen.

9. The whiskers on the lips are a bit too long. If you're having trouble making whiskers, try using the curving tool instead of the freehand one.

A. A nose from the front line. I'm horrible at this part, but the nose dips in a little on the top and then curves out on each side.
B. A nose from the the side view. You can still see the curve and the nostril.
C. A nose in 3/4 view. I never really use these much, and they're hard, but with some practice you'll get used to them (:

D. An eye from the side view. the pupil isn't usual,ly very visible unless the cat is looking sideways. Notice how it curves up. You can see some guide lines where to place it on my structure up top, it's going from the edge of the nose to the ending of the eye.
E. An eye from the front view. As Puddingwaffles said, the appearance of the eye depends much on the character and can express emotion c:

I'm not very good at legs, so you might have to look towards someone else to help you with those, but I hope some of the other things helped! Oh, also, try to try a structure beforehand. Those help a lot!
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Re: Redlining

Postby KaiKenNatsuki » Fri Sep 02, 2011 12:45 pm

Oh my, this truly helps a lot :3 Now I can see all my errors.
Thank you very much for it <3
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Re: Redlining

Postby meveh » Fri Sep 02, 2011 1:24 pm

Wow, Much more detailed than mine ^-^ Nicely done~
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Re: Redlining

Postby Taurus_Primus » Fri Sep 02, 2011 2:01 pm

KaiKenNatsuki wrote:Oh my, this truly helps a lot :3 Now I can see all my errors.
Thank you very much for it <3

No problem! <3

PuddingWaffles wrote:Wow, Much more detailed than mine ^-^ Nicely done~

Lol thank you! Yeah, but I really like your style. I always have trouble with eyes from the front and your look gorgeous!
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Re: Redlining

Postby melon » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:02 pm

Oh wow. This is truly amazing. Thank you, thank you, thank you! <3
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Re: Redlining

Postby TheCatchampion » Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:14 pm

This will help me myself aswell xD
I wont still the whole stlye, Duh.





















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    and you'll find yourself in a skirmish
    and you wish you'd never been born
    and you tie yourself to the tracks
    and there isn't no going back
    and its wrong wrong wrong
    aut we'll do it anyway cause we love a bit of trouble
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Re: Redlining

Postby santinel » Mon Sep 12, 2011 12:24 am

Yay xD Helped me.
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Re: Redlining

Postby Taurus_Primus » Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:57 pm

lol I'm glad I could help you guys ^^
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Re: Redlining

Postby tanatia » Thu Oct 13, 2011 8:50 pm

awesome!do you remember about my commish?"^^
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Re: Redlining

Postby Taurus_Primus » Fri Oct 14, 2011 1:09 pm

Yeah I'm sorry, But my studies this year are really time consuming this year and I've barely been on. Usually only a couple minutes at most. I only have the background left, so I'll try to finish it as soon as possible.
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