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Wire Frame ||CRITIQUES NEEDED|| by Zax

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Wire Frame ||CRITIQUES NEEDED||

Postby Zax » Mon Aug 29, 2011 2:19 pm

HELP!!!!! D:
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Re: Wire Frame ||CRITIQUES NEEDED||

Postby Livid-Silver » Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:11 pm

What part are you needin' help in?
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Re: Wire Frame ||CRITIQUES NEEDED||

Postby Wlyrout » Sat Sep 03, 2011 11:47 pm

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I think that this great. You need little help. : -)

Critique (since you asked for it):
The ears are slightly to small, and should be pulled back slightly in a jump. The legs need to become much broader at the top, but need to become wider in general. The backside is slightly squareish. You might want to fix it up in those areas, but other than that it looks fine!
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Re: Wire Frame ||CRITIQUES NEEDED||

Postby Zax » Sun Sep 04, 2011 2:51 am

Thanks! Ears and backs are my achilles heel. I need to fix them.
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