So what I was going for here was to try to capture the steam punk you wanted, while still putting my own spin. I added tribal markings, because you said you liked tribal, and I feel like they gave the design some depth. The green is the same green from Sealand's necklace and bracelet. I wanted to carry over a color from him that wouldn't be super obvious it came from him, like the blue. So I took the green and the brown from his shell. The brown is on the gear in her hair, which I wanted to be like a clip. She also has a few bracelets, one with a gear attached to that to. Her tail is supposed to be constructed out of metal, because she lost her real one in an accident. (I'll be writing the story behind that later, since I can't deiced between a hunting of flying accident.) The tail is mostly based off the metal heart, since I thought that looked really cool and I wanted to incorporate that into the design. The wings, well, they're based off the wings you liked. I'm pretty sure I don't want the dots on her ears to be piercings, but if you would like them like that, then that's what they are. Again, I'll be writing a back story later.
The only thing that I'm wondering is about Sealand's personality. Can you write a bit about him so I know in which way I should direct her? I don't want her to be super sarcastic if he isn't sarcastic at all. Also, if you have anything you want changed or added or if you have some pointers that would be great. Thanks
~ magic



