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Rain

by BlueCynder » Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:43 am

This is for Embergirl555's competition. i really want to come third or second!

i called her Rain because i thought it would be a nice name

there is a small leaf pattern on her hind leg. i just stuck it there because i thought it looked good. i hope people like it!

Evening walks among the orchard,

She greets the dancing dusk,

A spirit of the air;

A lady, if you must,

Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

Along the grass, among

The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.

BlueCynder