[StrawberryCookie]

This is my first drawing can anyone comment and say if there is anything i could improve on

[flagella]

Man, this is great for a first, my first drawing was waaaaay worse, haha. As for a tip, the colors you used in the sun seem to be a little brown. Try using more yellows, oranges and reds, or perhaps your monitor color may be a bit off.

[StrawberryCookie]

thanks no i used the burn tool to much XD