Henna Horse -- Critique please by Shokara

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Henna Horse -- Critique please

Postby Shokara » Thu Aug 04, 2011 7:11 pm

This is only the 4th time I've done any sort of drawing with a mouse or computer art (other than photo editing).

I would appreciated critiques. Constructive ones that is!! Tips are appreciated as I'm new at this.
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Re: Henna Horse -- Critique please

Postby Shokara » Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:15 am

bump
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Re: Henna Horse -- Critique please

Postby CanisInsanine » Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:06 am

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
An easy tip: when you want to color the mane, create a new layer UNDER the actual mane, and color it in fully inside the lines with whatever color (Dont forget the tail), then, click Lock Alpha so that the box is checked and color the mane in with the color you intended to use in the first place.
OR: go to the color layer for the horse, and click lock alpha so the box is not checked and color the mane with whatever color, then you can color it all on one layer!
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Re: Henna Horse -- Critique please

Postby Shokara » Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:43 pm

well THAT would have made it easier... LOL Im new to this so Im still trying to figure out the whole layer things.
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Re: Henna Horse -- Critique please

Postby CanisInsanine » Fri Aug 12, 2011 1:42 am

its okay! I was the same way when i started! lol!
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Re: Henna Horse -- Critique please

Postby AstralGrey » Fri Aug 12, 2011 12:04 pm

Its So Prettifuls!!!!
I haven't been on in a VERY long time! But I have a lot to trade to try to fulfill my wishlist.
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Re: Henna Horse -- Critique please

Postby Shokara » Fri Aug 12, 2011 12:15 pm

thank you :D
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Re: Henna Horse -- Critique please

Postby ~SNCastiel<3~ » Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:17 pm

the only thing i can critique is that you should probably get rid of the lines in the main and tail ;)

you can do that by clicking on the layer that says 'Outline' then use the erase button and erase any unwanted lines ^^

other than that it looks amazing!
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HAD I the heavens' embroidered cloths,
Enwrought with golden and silver light,
The blue and the dim and the dark cloths
Of night and light and the half-light,
I would spread the cloths under your feet
But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly, because you tread on my dreams.
~William Butler Yeats~
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