[mooni;]

I messed up on the tears :C I was REALLY craving to draw a wolves eye and this is what came out...Hmmm let me come up witha story...OH mehz gawt it
The brown wolf (Lai)had a mate ( a white wolf name Linn)
The great ruler of darkness (Midni) hated him for years to come always trying to kill him
One morning when Linn and the pups were playing outside while Lai was watching "The servers"(midni's servants) killed him right infront of his pups.
And that's the story :3
I don't think I'm Intermediate ready though.

[mooni;]

Comments Please? How did I do on this one.Please tell me I really want to know.

[fizzy-cats]

It's really good. I have a tip on the tears. They look better if you do a single tear line. I suggest starting at the inside right corner of the eye, then drawing a line that stops about halfway across the eye. Gradually thicken the line until it's about a centimeter thick, then taper it. From the thickest part, draw the tear, ending in a bulge. (If you wanna look, I have a couple of pics you could look at in my gallery.)

[mooni;]

Thank you very much ^-^

[fizzy-cats]

You're welcome.