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Walker Sketch by Zax

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Walker Sketch

Postby Zax » Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:40 pm

I got really bored, so I did a small sketch. It turned out halfway decent so I MAY make it an editable eventually. But first, I need some criticism, comments, and votes.

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Re: Walker Sketch

Postby SplashofOrangeJuice » Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:43 pm

This is really good!<3 I like it!
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Re: Walker Sketch

Postby voteforabbie » Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:43 pm

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Re: Walker Sketch

Postby Thankyouforthecoffee » Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:45 pm

Hey Zax! Oh wow! I love this!! xD
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I am not afraid to keep on living.
I am not afraid to walk this world alone.
Honey, if you stay, I'll be forgiving.
Nothing you can say will stop me going home.
Sing it for the boys.
Sing it for the girls.
Every time that you loose it sing it for the world.
Sing it from the heart.
Sing it 'till your nuts.
Sing it out for the ones that hate your guts.

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For all the dirty looks.
For photographs your boyfriend took.
You said you read me like a book, but the pages are all torn and frayed.
I'm okay.

Trust, you said.
Who put the words in your head?
Oh, how wrong we were
to think that immortality meant never dying.
Stand, take my f---ing hand and never be afraid again.
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Re: Walker Sketch

Postby Zax » Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:46 pm

-.- You should keep that advertisement in your signature. NOT in my thread, Breyer. Thanks Orange and Dawn.
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Re: Walker Sketch

Postby Gratefultritone » Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:57 pm

I think it's really awesome! It's tail is a little... Odd looking. But still, I love it. :)
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Re: Walker Sketch

Postby Zax » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:38 am

Yeah. The tail is very...strange...
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Re: Walker Sketch

Postby Daggett » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:49 am

Oooh, walkers <3

The legs are a bit long, and the heartgirth/ midsection looks a tad thin, try beefing it up a bit? Instead of lying flat against the neck, the mane [and tail] should be flowing out, assuming it's cantering in it's gaited way <3 Also, the back is a bit flat. Distinguish the croup area a bit more.
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Re: Walker Sketch

Postby Zax » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:56 am

Thank you for the criticism! I'll fix those right now because since you pointed it out, It irks me. Also, it was supposed to be a racking picture so the left back leg should be forward moving in the same direction as the front leg on the same side. *Shall fix now* O-o
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Re: Walker Sketch

Postby midnight133 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 5:06 am

hey i think its good but the legs are a little to long but the tail is good and the nostrial could be a little lower down but its really good :D
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