[ShadeyPaws]

Name: Everon (you can change it)

Gender: Male

Story: He was shut into a zoo, and whipped really badly. When he finally escaped with many scars and wounds, he couldn't get proper nourishment. So being wild, he devoured children from the countryside villages. Many men from the towns and cites tried to follow him to his portal deep under the black swamp. It is here where he first met Lavisha, a small dragon. Lavisha saw what he did, and cursed Everon. He would always bleed through his wounds, and he was the guard to the entrance to limbo. He would wonder aimlessly, and feast on the souls of evil people trying to get to paradise, but when he did he would see the faces of innocent children, and feel guilty for evermore. He could only escape this fate if he found a pure soul that would ease his pain and treat the wounds. And sometimes, on rare occasions, he would get that feeling, a shadow, a kindered soul watched him...

[Ayramite]

Really good job the only think I can suggest is to move the white down on the face on the head and use the nose for the black part so it doesn't look like a mask unless that's what your going for

[ShadeyPaws]

oh ok sorry. Its ment to sort of resemble a skull. Do you want me to move it down?

[ShadeyPaws]

Done

[Ayramite]

Much better it looked like a mask with the nose still visible but much better now

[ShadeyPaws]

Are we allowed to enter more than once?

[Ayramite]

Yeah you can enter as many times as you'd like