[briannabribri]

It is now done, I only had to add stripes on the cat. Hi Marwari this is my entry and here is my entry story . . .

I'm Rain, a mare who wanders alone in the great plains of America. Life was not always this way though. When I was born I had been born into ranch life, on a cowboy's farm. It had been raining that day, but the sun was out. The cowboys almost screamed when they saw the rainbow travelling across my body. They then put me out in the pasture alone, keeping all horses away from me. They had left me to die in that field, alone, scared, helpless, and hungry, but I stayed alive somehow. They came out day after day, night after night, yet I still stood there. I whinnied for someone to help me as I was too young to jump that horrible fence. It was a black fence, barbed-wire almost buried it. I was very scared for the first three weeks of my life. Then one day my mother galloped outside and jumped over the barbed wire. She knelt down beside me and neighed "Get on I'll help you over the fence." I got up on her bank, and my mom walked up to the fence. I jumped off and soared over the fence, only getting a small cut on my right hoof. I looked back to my mom and she neighed "Run! Keep going until you find a castle." I tilted my head, but then ran off. Eventually I reached the castle of Magical Beings and tilted my head confused as an older horse told me I had special powers and my mom had notified her of my powers. I looked back to the ranch, and I had shed a single tear . . .

[Foolish Games]

WOW! That's cool! Even if it's not finished yet

[briannabribri]

Aww thanks thats really kind of you.

[briannabribri]

Read the story now

[Vargulf]

The story is cool but unfortunately I have to say I don't want the cat...it states it in the rules but yeah great job. ^_^

[briannabribri]

Ok I'll edit it somehow.