[raina1219]

1)The gem on their trinket is the same color as their eyes.
2)hunters wears a bracelet while guards where shin guards.
3)leader is considered both the healer and the leader in the pack.

Name: Yan Vanna (Ya-wn va-n-a)
Age (at most 200 years):102
Gender: Male
Antler type:big horn sheep
Marking types Lion, cheetah
Region: West
Rank:Hunter
Parents:deceased most likely(reefer to story)
Personality:Rather mysterious most of the time, but when he loosens up a bit he becomes a bit playful liking to stalk and pounce on others to initiate some friendly play. He likes pups but is completely clueless about them and ends up riled up and crazy looking if you leave him to watch them for more then a half hour. and somehow the pups will end up in a big tree or on a cliff or something. His bright coat and clear markings seems to get the attention of other Isnaroh. But eh does not like large groups because they make him feel awkward. He loves to run under the moon by himself.
Story: He showed up in his pack one day already fully grown with no memory of where he cam from, all he knew was his name and how to hunt. When he showed up at the pack he had the necklace and bracelet that he wears on his tail, his hunters bracelet, and the leather strap on his back leg. feeling awkward at first he gained a reputation for being unfriendly while really he just felt rather lost and confused in the place he found himself at suddenly with no memory of how he got there other then a LOT of running. But it wasn't running like he was being chased just running. Since he was a bit shunned because of the bad reputation he found himself alone a lot, any friend he makes he is insanely loyal to though on the account that he does not have a bunch of them. When he showed up at the pack he had the necklace and bracelet that he wears on his tail, his hunters bracelet, and the leather strap on his back leg.

[Dancing with Bears.]

Thank you for entering!

This is a nice design- but you need to improve your form a bit.
Good luck

[Tundra]

Though this is nice, there is a bit too much red on that wolf.

Do Isnaroh have unnatural colors?
they do, but only in small quantities. These wolves are designed to be natural coloration. Bits of neon colors are not uncommon though such as a neon colored tongue or a few spots of green etc. But try and keep the wolf as natural in coloration as possible for your design.

quoted from my thread. The main base color should be a natural color. Maybe make the base black and the spots red, i would accept that. The Mane and Tail can stay as is

[raina1219]

what on the form needs to be fixed? and lots of animals naturally have red coats. red is a natural color.

[Tundra]

Red is not a natural color in big cats! their pelts are supposed to resemble big cats or a mix of big cats

[raina1219]

you didnt say big cats colors, you did say the markings. i assumed the pelts went with the whole wolf thing. i changed it to more orange like a tiger. so alls good.