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Amara - First Adoptable [Winner Posted!]

Postby TheSilverfeather » Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:52 am

Chii-sai wrote:;;Name;;
Siorys
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;;Reasoning Behind Name;;
Siorys is actually a boys name, and this character was originally going to be a boy, but after studying the design for a while, he began to turn into a she, and since I liked the name so well, I just kept it. Siorys actually has three different origins: Greek, English and Welsh. Although there is no meaning for it in Welsh, in both Greek and English, it means "Earth Worker".

;;Nickname;;
Siye

;;Possible Pet Name;;
Issy

;;Gender;;
Female

;;Age;;
Young Adult - One Year
(As of just being Adopted)

;;Rank;;
Beta
(Both of Siorys' parents were Omega's when she was born, so obviously, that's where she started. After quite a while of working, she became a Beta.)

;;Color on the Feather;;
Bright Red
(Although, unfortunately, the feather will contrast with her earthy colors, it might just bring a rich sense to the pallet.)

;;Personality;;
-Leader. Having become a Beta, this is an obvious trait she must have. She works well under pressure, and can sort problems out between other pack-member quite quickly. A flaw that comes with this characteristic, is that Siye can become a bit bossy- especially if others don't want to listen.

-Her Self Belief. Having grown up "sheltered", Siye, has, in a way, taught herself how to grow up, and so her self belief is very strong. She knows what she can do, no matter what others say, but doesn't get cocky about it.

-Loving. Siye is a very loving Amara- she cares for everyone in her pack. From the youngest Omega, to the mightiest Royal. Siye is a bit worried of finding her own mate, but very dearly wants to find him, and even have pups of her own one day.

-Responsible. This trait also "comes with the job", because obviously you can't have an irresponsible Beta to help lead your pack. Siye takes the tasks she's given, and sets out on accomplishing them immediately.

-Strategic. One thing Siorys is good at, if anything, is battle stratagies. She's not exactly sure where this characteristic came from, but she's glad she has it. Some call her stratagies crazy, and yes, some of them are. But amazingly enough, most of them actually manage to work out in the end, either by plan or not.

-Energetic. Siye is quite happy to have this trait- it keeps her awake even after a long night of patrolling. Not many can match Siye's energy. This characteristic definitely helps with her fighting and position.

-Curious. Siorys likes mysteries; if something happens, say a missing Amara, a lost item or even a problem, Siye likes to find the clues and link them together as best as she can. She doesn't give up easily if it's getting hard, and will usually pursue the problem until it's impossible to go any further.

;;Family?;;
Siorys was born to her mother and father with only one other sibling: a male, who unfortunately died a few hours later. Since her parents were so worried about loosing their only pup, they babied her, and kept her close. Because of this, Siorys didn't talk with her parents much. She didn't like having such a sheltered life, and told her parents that when she felt she couldn't take another day of them (she was a young teenager then, just ready to go off on her own). They were upset by the words their daughter told them, and thus rarely talked with her before they're deaths.

-Jaeger: Father. Was an older Amara- his fur was beginning to turn a bit white with age. Name means "heap of stones". Deceased- Died of old age.
-Pomona: Mother. Was quite a few years younger then her mate. Name means "fruit tree". Deceased- Died of grief for her mate.
-Orson: Brother. Name means "little bear". Deceased- Died a few hours after birth. (Same litter).
-Greetje: Older sister. Was part of the litter before Siorys and Orson- around 5 years prior. Name means "pearl". Likes Orson, she died a few hours after birth.
-Beryl: Older Sister. Was part of the litter before Siorys and Orson- around 5 years prior. Name means "green gemstones. Like Orson and the sister before her, she died a few hours after birth.

;;History;;
Honest to say, my coming into the earth was nothing special. I was just another pup out there, born to protect our family and gems from the Tueur's, who constantly threatened our existence. I had a brother- I can't remember much about him, other then the fact that he was a lighter yellow-green then myself. He had been born quite small and weak, destined to die only a few hours later. With their son gone, all attention was drawn to me. I grew up in a "plush" life, sheltered from the true, gruesome facts that lay just outside our cave. As sheltered and safe as I was, it was the last thing I wanted. All I needed was the fresh air- a day outside! A day to run around with other pups and make friends! A day where I wasn't covered from life, for who could actually live without seeing the true rises and downfalls of ones ever day life? By the time I had become a teenager, I had just about come to my wits end. So I told my parents what I wanted to do- I told them some day I'd become someone great, and not just another life ready to sacrifice themselves for the greater good. I didn't want to become them. I could tell my words had hurt them, but I didn't care. They didn't act like my parents. All they were, were guardians. Nothing more, nothing less. And so we just stopped talking to each other. In a few years they'd be able to have more, well-behaved pups who listened to their every word, but I wasn't one of them. And so I rose to the challenge I had so readily put before me and told my parents about. I worked my way up from my parents rank- Omega- to a well respected Beta. Of course, it didn't happen just over night. I had a lot of work to do. I trained, I learned how to fight, I became a leader. Unfortunately, both my parents passed away before they could see my rise to success. My father had died from old age- his dark gray fur had slowly been lightened as I grew older and more independent of my parents. It had only been a matter of time before he lost his life. And my mother? She died from grief. Sounds.. funny, if the word could be used for such a horrendous occasion. I'm sure she would still be alive if she had a willing daughter to help her through her grief, but I wasn't that daughter. My mother gave her life up because she lost the only thing that held her to the world. Besides; I'm sure both are much happier now that they can see their long lost son that they always wanted. And now... only time could tell what life had in store for me.

;;Short Stories;;
A Glimpse of the Past
"Two pups... they're going to be a lot of work. You know that, Pomona?"
"I think I know how to raise pups, Jaeger." Another voice shot back to the first.
"That's funny, but the last litter we had didn't make it the first night!" The first voice bit back loudly, causing my small suckling form to squirm.
"Don't you dare bring that up again! You know my taking care of them had nothing to do with their deaths! Greetje and Beryl died because of your bad blood!"
"My bad blood? If I remember correctly, this pup killing disease runs in your family!"
I could feel the body I was so closely bonded to shudder and let a little whimper out. For a while it was quiet before the first voice I heard spoke again.
"What I said was out of line. I-... I'm sorry. I know you lost many siblings to this disease- and who knows how many uncles, aunts, grandparents... It's amazing you're alive."
"I know... and it would be a miracle if our pups lived."
"We can hope right?"
"We can pray..."
"Have you decided on names?"
"I was waiting for you to help me."
"Well... we could name the girl Greetje or Beryl. It might be easier to remember-"
"God no. Never use those names again." The second voice interrupted the voice bitterly, a jolt going through the body before reaching me.
"Well, we could name the son Orson... after your father."
"And Siorys for our daughter."
"Siorys? My grandfathers name for a girl?" The first voice asked curiously after a minute of silence.
"I like it." The second voice fought back.
"Alright. I'm sure it will grow on me."

-A Few Hours Later-

I was awoken from my slumber- which I had fallen into after I drank my fill of milk -by my warm comfort leaving me side. I immediately began to search from my warmth, my food supply, with my nose and paws. I let out a curious yip, but still found nothing.
Since my body began to cool down, I snuggled up to my neighbor, who I had been with for months in a warmer, wetter world. I was shocked to find his body freezing- worse then my own. I began to yip in fear- something was wrong. Where were out protectors? Why was my neighbor cold? What if we were abandoned? What happens now?
"It's alright little one- I'm back. I just needed to leave for a moment. I've got to take care of myself, you know."
No! It's not alright! Something is wrong!
Her warm body appeared again, and I snuggled up to it, afraid of what was happening around me.
"Siorys, it's alright darling- I'm back. Orson, aren't you hungry yet? It's about time for you to eat.. Orson?"
The body shifted, sniffing the little body next to mine.
"No... no! Jeager! It's happened again..."
The body near me was soon removed, and I never felt him again.
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A Life Biting at the Chain
I had awoken early that morning- earlier then probably most of my pack. I could hear deep breathing and, every so often, someone shifting positions all throughout the dimly glowing cave. Most of the glowing was partly due to the gem in the very back of our cave, but some came from the cave entrance, a few yards forward. I could see the guard that stood at the mouth of the cave- he leaned warily against the stones, most likely "resting his eyes" from his long night on duty.
As slowly and quietly as I could, I lifted myself from the ground and went around my mother and father, who slept very close together. I picked my way through the rest of the crowd, stepping over paws and tails, young pups and adults.
Amazingly enough, I made it to the end of the cave without a single problem- every twitching paw was left untouched, every strand of fur exactly like it had been before I had awoken.
I knew I had a few minutes- thirty at the most -to look around outside. Truth be told, it would be my first time outside, and I could hardly contain my excitement.
With my head turned over my shoulder, watching for any suspicious movement, I ran toward the entrance of the tunnel. Only a few more feet to go!
"Oof-!" I ran into something quite hard, and practically had the wind knocked out of my in the process.
Falling backward on my rump, I looked up to see what- or who -I had run into.
With a gulp, I looked up at the guard who had been, only a few moments ago, sound asleep at the cave mouth.
His large amber eyes stared down at me for a moment, just studying me and my expression.
With a quick uneasy smile, I began to slip by him.
"Well, I think I'll be going now."
"Where do you think you're going, Siorys?"
I stopped for a moment, my eyes closed as I though of some lie.
"Oh you know.. I have to do to the backroom." I lied, turning around to look up at him. He was Kohaku. Only a few months older then me- about a year or so right about now. We were friends, you could say, but we didn't know each other- my mother and father never liked him. They called him "too reckless".
"You know I don't like it when you lie to me." I answered back, his eyes boring into mine.
"Haku, you know they still treat me like a baby when they shouldn't be- I'm going to be a year old in a few months!" I argued back, narrowing my eyes.
"Siye, I know they don't treat you fairly... but I can't just go against their rules. You have to go back inside." He said after a few moments.
I let my head hang for a moment before I picked my body up a sadly walked back into the cave.
As I walked past him, his long tail rubbed over my flank.
"Some day you'll be able to make your own decisions Siorys. You just have to wait."
(I didn't much describe Haku, other then the amber eyes... hope that's fine.)

;;Three things you know about Amaras;;
-Most common fur colors are gray, black and brown.
-Each Amara has wings that can be hidden in it's back.
-Healers have obtained the power to change the colors of the feather on an Amara's wrist.

;;Art;;
Not amazing, but oh well.

;;Other;;
Blelelelelelle! Thanks for looking my form over!


Congratulations Chii-sai! Siorys is now an official Amara ;3

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- Aysan1
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Re: Amara - First Adoptable

Postby dddddonuts » Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:53 am

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Re: Amara - First Adoptable

Postby Midnight[x]Traitor » Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:57 am

Another gorgeous one <3 As much as I love his/her design, I think I'll wait for a blue one or till you open up competitions.
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Re: Amara - First Adoptable

Postby Russell. » Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:59 am

Name:Den
Gender:female
Rank:Omega
Color on the feather:green
Art: viewtopic.php?f=34&t=673228
Family?:Yeah but I dont know who yet (others of this species when released)
History:WIP
Three things you know about Amaras:They all have a gem, skin between their tows but are like canine feet and their common colors are gray, black or dark brown
Other:
age-young
fears-larger animals/Amara ranks
likes-food and being energetic
personality-kind, skiddish, loving, energetic

I only need to finish history.
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Re: Amara - First Adoptable

Postby Larkspur1678 » Sun Jul 24, 2011 4:42 am

Name: Tyson
'Gender: Male
Rank: Gamma
Age: 4 years
Personality: Hard working and loyal, he can be quite shy and a bit distant though. He doesn't have many close friends in his pack, but those who are feel like brothers/sisters to him.
Color on the feather: Deep blue
Art: WIP
Family?: His mother was a gamma and his father a beta
History: He is 4 years old and life hasn't been the best for him. He misses his mother dearly, who was killed by the Tueur when he was only 4 months old. He has his father still though, but after his mom died he's been pretty distant. He was always told he looks a lot like his mother, perhaps his dad is seeing her whenever he looks at him. He just wishes he could have a normal, happy life.
Three things you know about Amaras: There are seven social ranks, the first one created was your Ciel, and the Healers touch a Amaras feather bracelet with its paw to change its color so the wolf can move up a rank.
Other: Theme song: The Good Life-Three Days Grace
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Re: Amara - First Adoptable

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sun Jul 24, 2011 5:05 am

Ignore my form...I think...maybe...c: xD
Name:Dax-tery
Gender:male
Rank:healer...I didn't see anything about healers not being able to have mates, but i'd like to ask just to be certain
Color on the feather:light/sky blue
Art:WIP
Family?:Mother died at a young age and father died of sickness
History:From my appearance my element would be secluded as Earth,yet I do not have the power of the land I have that of Water. My ability is strong suited to healing others with water,that is why I am a healer. My connection is included of all liquids. I could controls all as far as I knew,and my bond with them grew. my attack being able to heat or cool water to a certain temperature.

I started out small. My parents were very well surprised that I was born without any siblings. Maybe my parents had birthed another litter after me but I knew for certain I was the first child. They loved me dearly and raised me right,but when my mother died I turned a bit more cold and sarcastic,if you dig just a little you'll see the sweeter side that I had gained when my family was whole. My father tried to keep me happy but it was well known how much he yearned for the loving gaze of my mother.

That being said,I decided to train and gain more control over my powers and bring my ability up. II had unnaturally abundance of power with my element,even birth. Within all the time training and learning as much as I could I gained an upper right. My water though doesn't just help with power,I used my water to help, in anyway that I can and it helped me back. Why do you think my fur glistens and is softer then anything?why do you think it still has strong stiff edges?because elemental liquidation powers help.

Becoming a healer was the best experience for me. Of course my life isn't based off just getting my powers to the max(*cough yes it is cough*) I love to see new things,I stay home but likely to say I like to learn so that I can show my potential to others and show that I have greatness in the world. Needless to say I have a fear. A fear of having no porpoise in life,we were created into this planet we call home;Porsios not to just know we have our kind there it's to show our real potential. I mite have been like the others if it wasn't for my mothers death. It still burdens me to think of all the joyous and melancholy times that arose in front of us. When we were a whole,a full family.

Now this part revolves around my father. As my feather changed into a pale sky blue color I smiled. My father smiled as well,proud of his only son. I could see it on his face. My grin grew. Little did I know my father would be sickened the next day,with only one herb being able to cure him. That herb was far,far away everyone knew we could never reach it in time. We were all flabbergasted when we saw the symptom of this decease. Never has it come to our species since a millennial has passed. At that time we have an abundance of that herb hidden away fresh and pasely.

Once his death came I constantly left the safety of the whole pack and went to find some new things to do. You know the saying "you won't know what you'll miss until it's gone"?well that kind of contributes to me. I loved them bout but when tear gone you sit down and think about things. Things that hurt you and yet make you smile. Bitter-sweet memory of the fun you had with them,the good times,the bad times,how you all stuck together through it all and now how there gone. It just hits you like a ton of rocks and theirs not return no pause,rewind,start over. Therese only one setting and it feels like...game over but it really is just continue.

It took a wile for realization to hit me. That if I kept on graving about the past there won't be any future. I started talking to others more,but I was still a bit distant. I had senses in me,they helped me to gain information,I some what knew not to trust some Amara's and that others were easier to trust. Even though I grew more open,I also stayed secluded. That's just my personality. It's formed around my life and that being so,I am who I am. Nothing can change that,nothing big nothing small,nothing in the world at all.

~WIP~Writers block Dx

Personality:
Capable;He is capable to take care of himself and what needs to be done. He doesn't need someone to tell him what to do. If there asking once is enough to get him on his way. He’s not very forgetful and will get to you,in the speed he takes himself to be at that time and yet to please. The longer it takes the better the sooner it take you'll see it takes such short amount of time.
Emotional;He is filled with lout of emotions,from sad to happy and in between. The reason for this is because he's experienced all these emotions,from the good day when he his mother and father were all one happy family, to the painful days of remembering thous good memory’s. A melancholy happiness,his life is what you call bitter-sweet and so he inherits that form of emotion.
Hidden;Dax is one to be hidden from the world in his own stratus sphere. He goes the way he want's to and lives the way he needs to,taking on the extra hardship like nothings in the path.
Hidden fears;He has fears of not fitting in,though he is alone most of his time,others still accept him an see him in a high role. He doesn't want to be the only one there,as if one species upon a group of different species. He also fears of losing the ones he has gotten close to and doesn't get close to other many times because of his fear for betrayal,being used and losing them for some reason.
Hard working;He trains a lot,he hipes himself to full potential then push’s on to become better then the best that he can become. This is to prove himself to the world and to the others on his kind.
Kind heart-ed/sweet;When you dig just a little you'll see a more softer gentler kind to Dax. A side he rarely shows. A fun loving and carefree side he sometimes even hides from himself.
Learner;Dax is ready to learn about new things, what ever way they come,he eats up a challenge just to learn new tactics and step up his skills. He learns pretty quickly and doesn't need reminders.
Loner;As you know he isn't much of a part of the group. He rather to doing thinks by himself and not having distraction. Things that annoy or bother may not be his strong points but he has emotional control over himself,bringing vibes to the environment,so he is capable of himself.
Lonely;He when looking outside and seeing all the interaction of the others wishes to have a friend, a mate he can love,but then thous reacquiring dreams are though of and it all vanishes into solemn silence. He does wish though,because he knows it's the circle of life he's in.
mature;He isn't running around playing. Though he isn't chubby nor flimsy he's got strength and weight put on his back to strive. He knows what to do at the right time yet it's immature to think alone will suit,as they say everyone needs someone.
Not seen;He is very stealthy and avoids contact with others at containing will."I would rather be alone" he is contended to say.
Searcher;He searches for the meaning of things,because he knows there must be a reason something happened. Why it was commanded. He want's to know who controls his world and every one else as well.
Secluded;To himself,he likes to think. Think of the future,think of the past. Think of how the road of life will wind through for him.
Silent;He doesn't talk to others much,he'd rather think to himself. How to improve and stratigraphic things he hasn't tried. Find out new things.
Spiritual;He is in well balance with the land,he knows what's wrong with it and how it can help him and his pack mates. From imagination to the real world he knows how to set out a balance. Though somethings are misfit and put into the middle.
story teller;Likes to imagine,in his spare spare time,yes his spare spare time not spare time. Make up story’s or think of how to word the truth. How to mold the words and weld the story line together with the plot of the world.
wise/knowing;He knows of what is right and what needs to say to each one of his species relating to personal matters connecting to personality.


All in alphabetical order cx


Age:young adult

Ugh it doesn't sound good any more!I’ll finish it another time,I had it perfectly right-en out then the computer went on to something else stupid GDC's link,though GDC's aren't bad
Three things you know about Amaras:they have skin between there toes,if two males want the same female they must have some sort of flying competition,a female has to wait 2 years to have another litter
Other:Everything is spell checked c: even the others...I was thinking partially blind?i did not steel blind or parents dieing from another person,I came up with it before but then it got erased...I had to do this form again Dx I read you’re thread but some parts were hard to understand,I’ll probably reread it to not get any information wrong
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Re: Amara - First Adoptable

Postby TheSilverfeather » Sun Jul 24, 2011 5:51 am

Thanks for the forms guys :3

Aysan1; Yeah, I'm not english myself so writing all that really takes a lot of effort ^^; I'm not great with spelling either, so please bear with what I managed to pull out...
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Re: Amara - First Adoptable

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sun Jul 24, 2011 5:57 am

It's fine. I'm not eather,but i'm pretty good.People complament my wrighting alot, xD
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Re: Amara - First Adoptable

Postby TheSilverfeather » Sun Jul 24, 2011 6:01 am

I'm actually better than I was xP Before I would write really bad sentences, and I would write "whit" instead of "with" x3 I've spent lots of time studying english though, and I'm gradually getting better at it ;3 I haven't complained Dx I think your english is great, for I do understand what you mean ;3
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Re: Amara - First Adoptable

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sun Jul 24, 2011 6:11 am

xD thank you,and i'm not trying to be mean or anything I mean everone has there strong points.
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