WAS Competition entry 1: Theron by apache~

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WAS Competition entry 1: Theron

Postby apache~ » Sun Jul 17, 2011 12:05 pm


yeahhhh I'm doing two
SIGH I CANT DECIDE WHICH DESIGN IS MY FAVORITEEEE
(if I win other WAS members will be able to color this lineart in)

so this is Theron, the info for him will be coming soon.

Out of the contest- already accepted. not one of the winners.

Name: Theron (this is an ancient greek name, meaning 'Hunter')

Age: 289 years old

Gender: Male ♂

Element: electricity

Personality: Theron is extremely stubborn, and ill-tempered. He is easily angered and almost always in a bad mood. He does not take kindly to any disrespect, trespassing, rudeness or hostility towards him, and will quickly set the offender straight. Theron likes to live in solitary, and even if he does have a friend he will try to act as if they are not his friend to a point, only giving subtle hints that he really does not want them to leave him. He has always feared letting his friends down, and being a disappointment. So instead he has walled himself way so that the only thing he can disappoint is himself. He will often find people in need, and of course save them, but not soon after he has disappeared again. He will never turn down someone in need of a knight to rescue them, but this is only to prove that he is still strong and overall 'still has it'. He has a secret soft-spot for kids, but goes out of his way to avoid them more so than others. Seeing a disappointed child... that is heartbreaking. Even for him. He is absolutely terrified of water.

Attacks:(I'm guessing everyone has different attacks? So I will be drawing references of these later, though they might not all get done by the time the contest is over. So if I win, of course I will continue. I also added a little gage of how much energy each uses, by adding how tiring they are. obviously a more tiring attack uses more energy. it is gauged at: not very tiring, tiring, and very tiring)

Lightning Storm ---- bolts of lightning shock the opponent repeatedly for a few seconds, at high voltage. tiring

Nerve Jolt ---- thunder-bold shaped teeth bite down on the opponent, sending shocks through their entire nervous system, both paralyzing them for about 15 seconds (everyone's body is different so the time differs) and causing every nerve in their body to feel excruciating pain for a maximum of 5 seconds (usually it is more like 2-3) tiring. causes a little pain to him as well

Lightning Beam ---- a very bright bolt of lighting is shot from his mouth and aimed at the opponent, shocking them and causing pain. Can be charged for slightly longer to strengthen the attack. tiring/very tiring.

Anesthetic ---- a paw is touched on a subject, and a small jolt of electricity surges through their body, temporarily causing a numbness in the general area touched. If the head is touched, the whole body is numbed. With a forceful touch to the head (giving a larger shock) the subject can be temporarily put to sleep not very tiring

Thunder Roar ---- an ear-splitting roar sent through the ear at high frequencies not very tirning

Armor type: silver

Special Ability: moves and thinks extremely fast

Story:

Water. That wretched water...

A huge metal tank was filled to the brim, and Theron was tossed inside. The sides were completely smooth, and tall. They were made of thick slabs of petal, making him unable to break his way out. "He's lasted longer this time." A man said, his voice distant. Theron sent shocks out into the water, but it was in vain. The shocks did nothing but weaken him. He splashed in the water, trying to keep his head up, but his legs were so tired. His head bobbed under the water, before he heaved himself back up and let out a loud and extremely high roar. The scientists clutched their heads from inside, but they wouldn't let him out. Once again he sank below the water.

He would struggle and struggle, but each time he would sink to the bottom. His eyes would go black, and water would fill in his lungs. The exact moment he hit the ground, the scientists would pull him out, squeeze all the water out of him, and then plop him in a cage. Soon the process was repeated. Theron was nothing but an experiment to them; a test of durability- a saber's breaking point. Supposedly it was important for a project they were working on... what sort he knew not.

Theron hated them. They were supposed to be dead. he had killed some himself! But foul rats they were, and they crawled back from under their shadows and re-emerged. He was captured, tagged and thrown into this place. It wasn't just the water... Every week they would shoot him with some sort of gun, causing him to go unconscious so that they could strap him down. Then they would prod him, beat him, burn him, sometimes break his bones until he would retaliate. It was not even worth the fight anymore. His retaliation had to be a form of electricity before they would stop, and it was sucked out of the air so that they could use it again for something Theron knew only to be diabolical and evil.

One day they didn't use enough sedative. Theron acted as if he was tranquilized, but his mind was much awake. When they had taken him out of the cage area, he bit into the man carrying him, and sent out massive thunderbolts to the others nearby. He was able to narrowly make his escape, and once outside he looked back briefly at the building he had stayed in for what seemed years, but was really only a few weeks. Written on the side was "W.A.G."

Theron was curious as to what that could mean, but with no time to spare he left the facility behind, and all it's memories buried down within him. He vowed that someday he would return, and make sure every last one of the scientists that had tortured him was dead.
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Re: WAS Competition entry - work in progess

Postby indi626 » Sun Jul 17, 2011 12:07 pm

Love the pose ^-^
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Re: WAS Competition entry - work in progess

Postby Neara » Sun Jul 17, 2011 12:50 pm

Woah, this competition is getting really tough to judge, in my opinion.. We have so many well known artists in it <:o

Oh and i totally love these lines, they would be perfect for Busva, because you can see the whole back in this one ^^

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Re: WAS Competition entry - work in progess

Postby Chasing Dreams » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:22 pm

This is going to be really hard to judge...derp.....how shall I help pick some winners.

Amazing lines apache! I can wait until you finish!
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Re: WAS Competition entry - work in progess

Postby KaiKenNatsuki » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:29 pm

Chasing Dreams wrote:This is going to be really hard to judge...derp.....how shall I help pick some winners.

Amazing lines apache! I can wait until you finish!
Neara wrote:
Woah, this competition is getting really tough to judge, in my opinion.. We have so many well known artists in it <:o

Oh and i totally love these lines, they would be perfect for Busva, because you can see the whole back in this one ^^

Luff your work apache :}


I agree T-T

Lol, but it's getting awesome!

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Re: WAS Competition entry 1: Theron

Postby apache~ » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:43 pm

thanks guys ;____;

so I've got the first design, Theron. I kinda focused on a storm for him. anyway, the original lines are still saved, without his lightning bolt teeth <3
His eyes are supposed to be 'the eye of the storm', sorta. If you look closely you can see a thunderbolt splitting around his pupil and going down the middle of his eye.

the psychic one is still coming... I'm just not completely sure on what I want to do with him :/
I know his personality for sure though. so I have something at least.

edit: I think he's done :O I hope his story is okay to do.... with the whole testing thing.
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Re: WAS Competition entry 1: Theron

Postby Prince of Awesome » Sun Jul 17, 2011 6:03 pm

KaiKenNatsuki said that they judge by the form, so make the form extra good(Mine has a story that is about what happens in my sabers crazy little world.)
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Re: WAS Competition entry 1: Theron

Postby TheWolfsgirl90 » Sun Jul 17, 2011 10:13 pm

People we are so cruel to KaiKenXD

I´m so happy that I don´t have to judge :mrgreen:

btw!It´s really awesome!^^
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Re: WAS Competition entry 1: Theron

Postby KaiKenNatsuki » Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:18 am

TheWolfsgirl90 wrote:People we are so cruel to KaiKenXD

I´m so happy that I don´t have to judge :mrgreen:

btw!It´s really awesome!^^


YES.
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XD I loved this, Apa!! It's truly an awesome design :3
His tooth also seem really cool :)

I loved it ^^

Soul-Sama wrote:KaiKenNatsuki said that they judge by the form, so make the form extra good(Mine has a story that is about what happens in my sabers crazy little world.)


I will judge by the design too, obviously.
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Re: WAS Competition entry 1: Theron

Postby Transmute » Fri Aug 05, 2011 9:11 am

>.< I really wanna color this in. XD
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