[harlical]

This is just another one of those fursona art peices. I kinda like how it came out, but it is still horrible xD comments appreciated!

PS, the white and blue creature is my fursona. She is a lion/wolf mix and her name is Luna. No stealing her designs please!

[Offended Cockatiel]

May I give some constructive crit?

[harlical]

yes, please. Any advice is appreciated :3

[Offended Cockatiel]

1.Have a little fun with the bg,I saw in you'r allery I saw you do lineless bg's but have fun with them
small example and it's not the only way I just feel to lazy to search for another: viewtopic.php?t=656316
2.on some parts he's too stiff looking then on others he's too curvy look at a ref of a wolf for the right antonomy
3.I see you made it bulk,maybe because it's half lion or something but to make it more wolf like and less skin dog like add some fur on the back of his neck and a small bit to the front
4.the feet's antonomy need to be worked on
5. Antonomy again anyways it looks more like a dog,then it does a wolf lion mix...just pointing out so you should search up the animal and see wich part you want to look more like a lion and wich part more lkike a wolf
if she's a female,as the name kind of indacates she does look kind of feminen if you search for it but she should look more like it.