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A Moonlit Night at Sea by ArianaFire

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A Moonlit Night at Sea

Postby ArianaFire » Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:27 am

EDIT: there, i fixed the water. better?

Just fooling around with oekaki
It probably sucks.
I was trying out at the effects of light on water. I obviously failed. :roll:
The timer is not right. I left this open as I was eating breakfast.

So, comments are welcome.

Any suggestions on how to do realistic water? I'd appreciate it.
Overall I don't think I failed but I could have done better.

~ Ariana
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Re: A Moonlit Night at Sea

Postby dead. » Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:30 am

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Re: A Moonlit Night at Sea

Postby Blitz. » Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:30 am

I think you did really good on this! I have no advice for water though, I have never drawn it well xD
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Re: A Moonlit Night at Sea

Postby The Last Raven » Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:39 am

I like this! It is very serene.

I do, though, find the water a bit hard to look at without hurting my eyes. The Moon's reflection is a bit too bright. Maybe blend it some more to soften it? For the water, I think you just need to bled it some more. Make the blender tool a little large and use strokes that go in one direction with just a little bit of a waver. It'll make things flow a bit more. I hope this helps!
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Re: A Moonlit Night at Sea

Postby dead. » Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:48 am

i tried to copy this, i hope its okay.
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hey im olivia
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or uh, hoard pets
and i <3
halloween and other
creepy pets.
i dont really
do much here.
(:
see ya around

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Re: A Moonlit Night at Sea

Postby ArianaFire » Wed Jul 06, 2011 2:19 pm

OMG PEOPLE LIKE THIS! wow, i never thought anyone would like it

The Last Raven wrote:I like this! It is very serene.

I do, though, find the water a bit hard to look at without hurting my eyes. The Moon's reflection is a bit too bright. Maybe blend it some more to soften it? For the water, I think you just need to bled it some more. Make the blender tool a little large and use strokes that go in one direction with just a little bit of a waver. It'll make things flow a bit more. I hope this helps!


thanks so much Last Raven! that helps a LOT!
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Re: A Moonlit Night at Sea

Postby The Last Raven » Wed Jul 06, 2011 3:30 pm

Looks a whole lot better! Good job. Keep up the good work. :)
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hi! i’m a long time player
who loves to hoard chameleons
and anything else that tickles my fancy.
i am a huge nerd and love to cosplay!


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Re: A Moonlit Night at Sea

Postby ArianaFire » Wed Jul 06, 2011 6:58 pm

Thanks! :)
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