[.Survivor.]

First try at an Oekaki.
The title is Rising out of the Fire, and the Phoenix is the Bird of fire. I was just playing around with the tools, not sure what to try, and then this came.
I wanted to draw something that might mean something to someone and I chose the Phoenix, because, Just like we face the Fires and the storms of everyday life, We CAN Prevail! The Phoenix would rise out of the ashes or fires, always seeming to come back and never give up on life. We need to remember this and Never give up, no matter how hard the storm or fires you are facing!




Feedback welcome please

[.Survivor.]

Feedback...please?...anyone?...

[Sdlhf]

This is very powerful, and a beautiful image. I would only suggest making your edges a tiny bit smoother, and then I think it will be very close to perfect.

[Sila]

this is really neat! great job!

[.Survivor.]

How would I make it smoother? I don't understand what you mean. Do you mean use a different brush?
And thank you both for the nice things and feedback you said.

[Sdlhf]

How would I make it smoother? I don't understand what you mean. Do you mean use a different brush?
And thank you both for the nice things and feedback you said.

I guess maybe make the feathers a bit more defined, the beak pointier, stuff like that. XD

[.Survivor.]

Oh, ok. Thanks!!! I'll try as soon as I get to my laptop. Unfortunatly, my smart phone is not smart enough to upload the art program...