[Kiliann]

Hai!
This is Night. I'm not so great at drawing on Oekaki, but I thought I'd try my hand at some adoptables.
This was originally going to an eevee, but I didn't start off so well, so now it's a dragon!
It isn't ready for adoption, just thought I'd post it for critique and such. Does this look like an okay adopable?
It's only in sketch form, but I plan to make add-ons and other things to go on it later (including a SPYRO version!)

~Night

[Optimistic Kitten]

*like*
Cute! But the tail is a bit oopsies. and you should thicken the lines a bit

I like it! *wants to see it in real form*

[Kiliann]

I've edited it now. This is how it will probably look in a blank state.
Does anyone else have any suggestions? If not, I'll go ahead and start on the adoptable add-ons.

[Sunbeargirl]

Spyro? You don't even know who Spyro is! (Well.. you've never played the games, but you've probably seen him.) I'll order, but could I be an artist with you? That'd be great!

[Kiliann]

Okay!
I wasn't considering hiring an artist, but you know more about dragons than I do. But how do I let you edit it?
I can only give you permission to color it in.

[Sunbeargirl]

Just let me colour it in and I'll edit it at school or something.