I'm trying to make a scene from one of my RP's, where one of my charries, Zek, gets attacked by a demon named Feyria. He falls from the top of a water fall and lands on his head. His crush, Carly, falls into the water. Zek rescues Carly even with his skull shattered and blood pouring out of him. He dies right when he gets Carly out of the water. Here is the RP if you want to join and/or see the part where this is happening. the first link is the RP home page and the second is where Zek rescues Carly.
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=587654
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=587654&start=330 (the post where the demon comes in is near the middle/end)
This picture is horrible, it looks NOTHING like how I wanted it to. :\

