Jerome-san wrote:Geirou wrote:Just another example of my new style. I know the anatomy isn't amazing on this one, but it was really just a quick sketch. ^^, I probably spent more time on the BG than the actual dog. 8D.
The design is random, but I guess it is still copyrighted to me. x3♥
Comments only, no critism please.
For experienced artists looking for some criticism and commentary from other artists
If you're gonna post in intermediate, then you're gonna get criticism. If you don't want it, then don't post here.
And I do have a little bit.
I understand it's your new style, but eyes aren't huge black dots. And the background is kind of... simple. Maybe if you added more shading to the dog/wolf it would look better, and maybe if you added some small patches of actual grass it would look better, too. But I do like it.
I asked for NO critism. Follow my wishes, or don't comment at all, please.
The style is a cartoony kind of style, and I CAN draw proper eyes, but they didn't suit the style. Neither did detailing the grass. .__.
Look closely. She does actually have some shading. If I added to much, she would look like she was burning, :/
talkativegrape wrote:(At Jerome-san)
I disagree with your statement. If they said 'No criticism please' Don't give it to them. Tell them like you did, but don't 'push their button' By saying WHAT they need to do. But I do agree with Jerome-san. Just not the adding on about what It needs work on. And I do agree with you about liking this<3
I Love your new style, and the trees are so eye-catching! Anna has no apparency of looking poorly-done. It was neat, well expressed!<3
~TG
First of all, I would like to start off by saying, thank you for respecting my wishes. 8D♥,
And then, I know that there are some errors, but I taught myself the anatomy of an animal, googling only a few pictures, so I am not keen on detail. That is why I prefer a cartoon-ish style. ^^,
I love the style too, and I like the trees. ^^,
Im glad you think that she looks okay, and there is actually some shading on her. ♥