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Fell by Ovacalix

Artist Ovacalix [gallery]
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Fell

Postby Ovacalix » Sun May 22, 2011 10:20 pm

Feeling down, alone, and empty inside,
Decisions to make, but can't decide,
Hurt from pain of a broken heart,
Days go on as if they are dark,
Looking for happiness, the light to return,
My soul feels empty, deceptive, a burn.


This is one of my OC's, Fell. You may be wondering what the lines on his cheeks are..... those are gills. He is from a comic series i am writing and he is a mix between two types of wolves, water and dark (or Hada and Oric). The eyes and markings are his Oric genes and his gills(obviously) and blue color his hada half.


Please rate and comment! Kind constructive criticism is gladley accepted! :D
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Re: Fell

Postby Ovacalix » Sun May 22, 2011 11:22 pm

Up i say! up up! lol
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Re: Fell

Postby favagel » Sun May 22, 2011 11:30 pm

Not bad. Perhaps you could try little stronger shading?
I dig the rose. c:
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Re: Fell

Postby Ovacalix » Sun May 22, 2011 11:33 pm

favagel wrote:Not bad. Perhaps you could try little stronger shading?
I dig the rose. c:


Ok stronger shading...... Writes down Got it ^^!
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Re: Fell

Postby Ovacalix » Mon May 23, 2011 1:44 am

Uperz.
Constructive criticism? Anymore?
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Re: Fell

Postby Tsume1 » Tue May 24, 2011 9:56 am

Yesh! Good work.
Like Favegirl said maybe a bit more shading and you would be good!
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