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let me burn....... by .:Ash~cloud:.

Artist .:Ash~cloud:. [gallery]
Time spent 50 minutes
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let me burn.......

Postby .:Ash~cloud:. » Thu May 19, 2011 6:22 am

let me burn,
just let me die,
leave me hear and let me lie,
i know i have done wrong thats why i cry,
but i know i want you,
and that is all to true,

i just made it up so dont ask XD i would LOVE COMMENTS AND CRITTS please ^_^ thanks
its my first time doing fire (ment to be XD XS) background so tips would be GREAT ^^
Im in a field because things did not go my way
poem by me!
Why did I get involved? does he still love me? I hope so…
I lay down in the daisies, trying to think of something to do,
gifts wrapped

I see a lady walk past with her dog “ these daisies look nice” she bent down beside me and wiped my tears “cheer up” she whisperd “things will work out” she left clasping some daisies, her dog at her side. I rolled on my belly looking at the daisies, being blown gently into my face, surrounding me like a blanket by the wind I plucked one out from the ground, about to strip it of its identity, without these its just bare I was just about to when a voice said inside my head : “why ruin a perfect, beautiful flower when I know he loves me not?” I tossed it and watched it fly away
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Re: let me burn.......

Postby .:Ash~cloud:. » Thu May 19, 2011 7:06 am

anyone :cry: no one ever comments on my work i guess it is bad *sniffles*
Im in a field because things did not go my way
poem by me!
Why did I get involved? does he still love me? I hope so…
I lay down in the daisies, trying to think of something to do,
gifts wrapped

I see a lady walk past with her dog “ these daisies look nice” she bent down beside me and wiped my tears “cheer up” she whisperd “things will work out” she left clasping some daisies, her dog at her side. I rolled on my belly looking at the daisies, being blown gently into my face, surrounding me like a blanket by the wind I plucked one out from the ground, about to strip it of its identity, without these its just bare I was just about to when a voice said inside my head : “why ruin a perfect, beautiful flower when I know he loves me not?” I tossed it and watched it fly away
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Re: let me burn.......

Postby Not me nope » Thu May 19, 2011 7:17 am

perhaps keep more black in the backround 8D

It's really good~ I love the poem~ Check my latest too (yes the dino)
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All I want is nothing more,
To see you knocking at my door,
'Cause if I could see your face once more,
I would die a happy man I'm sure.

~ Kodaline (All I Want)
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